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the End of Rocks, Hard places and Rehab..
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“Well, the number is there if you want it Shane”
“Thanks”
Carmen was headed home to relax and get ready for work the next day; she waited patiently for Sloan’s phone call. She tried her hardest to back to focus on her work. She knew she was falling behind. Carmen didn’t want to lose anything that she had recently worked on with Russell. Melanie and Carmen were a team and she was planning to make Melanie her protégé.
Sloan got off the plane at JFK were a chauffer waited for holding up a card that read “Matthews”. As she pulled up to her father’s loft, she was missing Carmen but she knew it would only be home for two weeks. Sloan knew her father might ask her to extend her stay, but she couldn’t she had her job backing L.A, even though the pay was much better than she was getting back in L.A. By the time Sloan got to her New York loft it was late and she was on a three hour time difference from Carmen. Carmen was in her ninth dream when Sloan was just pulling up to the Manhattan apartment. It was 11:45 pm and in L.A it would’ve been 2:45 am. Sloan made a mental note to call her in the morning.
The next morning at the planet and before going to work Carmen decided to go to the planet to have breakfast. She hasn’t seen the girls in a couple of weeks, and needed to get her mind off of Sloan. When she walked into the planet she saw Bette, Tina and Tasha sitting at the usual table having their breakfast. Carmen thought about what it used to be like when Dana was alive and she, when she and Shane were together. She just put her head down and smiled thinking of all the memories they had at the planet.
Kit: hey baby girl
Carmen: oh, hey kit how are you?
Kit: well, considering that I haven’t seen you in awhile. How are you and that roommate of yours?
Carmen: Sloan, well ah
Kit: don’t tell me you are not living together anymore
“No we are,” Carmen scratch her eyebrow. Right now she is in New York for two weeks
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yay sharmen…glad they can’t stay away from each other but not glad that they both still have girlfriends…great chapter…PPS!
Surgtech, I’ve been silently following along with your wonderful story for the last few days. I don’t usually comment, but I felt compelled to due so after reading this ending, or better stated — cliffhanger. Please don’t leave this story this way. If this is complete and it really truly is the “end”, then at least give the readers a sequel. I’ve always wanted to see Shane and Carmen end up together, but not this way.I can certainly appreciate the way that you have portrayed both of their characters in your story. You’ve kept them true to form, yet I can’t help but believe that Shane is now ready to commit and sacrifice her outlandish unfaithful ways in order to be with Carmen – the true love of her life. Since much of your story followed some of the storyline from the show, I think that toward the end, Shane had matured. The old Shane would have never allowed Phyllis to drive her away from Molly, but she wanted to spare Molly. She put her own selfishness aside, and let Molly go.BR>If you feel inclined to do so — sequel that is… I would like to see/read her fight for Carmen — prove herself to Carmen – admit her undying love to Carmen and make things right with Mrs. Morales.Nevertheless, if this really is the “end” and you have no desire to write a sequel, then I just want to thank you for sharing your story and at lease giving us an ending with the two of them together — loose ends and all…Thx,