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the End of Rocks, Hard places and Rehab..
“Oh, by the way we are invited to a Christmas at Kits.
CHAPTER XXXVI
After Carmen hung up the phone with Sloan she went back to her knee deep paper work, She heard a knocking at her office door, “come in” she replied to the person knocking at her door.
When Carmen looked up to see who it was she was confronted with a pair of green eyes.
“Shane what are you doing here”? Carmen said surprisingly.
Scratching the back of her head, “I wanted to see you” shoving her hands in her pockets “maybe take you to lunch or we can stay here an order in”
“We can’t, Shane”
“Why not” it’s just lunch Carmen
“You and I both know what will happen”
“Don’t get ahead of yourself” im not here to fuck anything up”, I have done enough of that.
Carmen bit her lip, “I’m sorry Shane” folding her arms in front of her chest. “So” as Carmen walk over to lean on the front of her desk, Shane just stood there and fantasized about walking up to her grabbing the back of the neck and kissing her passionately.” Shane” Carmen called out.
“Huh, what”
“I asked you why you came here today”
“I just wanted to see you, when I saw you at the planet, I guess what I want to say is that I am sorry for everything I’ve done”, but Carmen I miss you like you would not believe.
“How’s Molly, Shane, are you two not doing to well”
“I don’t know; it’s just that sometimes, when I need to talk to you, you’re not there”
Carmen shook her head in disbelief, “you know Shane you amaze me”. “What happen that night in the club when you left me to go with Molly”?
Shane started to walk over to Carmen,” I was stupid, but I knew you didn’t want to be with me, and you deserve better”. Shane was standing only inches from Carmen lips. Carmen was breathing rapidly. “Shane what are you doing”.
Carmen, stopped Shane mid way, “Melanie can you hold all my calls please”
“No problem Carmen, are you okay”
Carmen cleared her throat “No, I’m, she looked at Shane “I’m fine, .Melanie”
Shane had her hands up her skirt, placing her palms on her thighs; she began to kiss her on her neck.
“Shane we can’t do this”
“Your not stopping me are you” I can’t give you up, Carmen.” Carmen’s chest began to rise and fall rapidly as Shane only stood inches from her lips. She didn’t know what to do, everything was spinning out of control, and Shane was all over her just like the very first night they met. She unbutton Carmen’s blouse exposing her pushed up breast, Carmen couldn’t resist, as she tussled on Shane’s hair, kissing her hard. “Oh my god, Shane” she said as she started losing patience and unbutton Shane’s pants. “Touch me Shane, I want you, I want you so fucking bad”, Shane did what she was told. Shane sat on the couch and let Carmen straddle her. Shane was enjoying every minute of her lunch hour with Carmen, watching Carmen move with such a rhythm that it was bringing Shane to her own climax, noticing Shane; Carmen shoved her hand down Shane’s pants to the place where only Shane only allowed Carmen. “Shane I’m almost there, oh baby” she cried out. Shane clenched her jaw and rolled her eyes behind her head as she was well on her way too, “Oh, Carmen” I fucking miss you. “Shane I miss you too” she replied. Carmen could feel herself tighten and when it came she snapped her legs shut on Shane’s thighs, gripping her tight. “Oh, Shit” Carmen said breathing heavily.
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yay sharmen…glad they can’t stay away from each other but not glad that they both still have girlfriends…great chapter…PPS!
Surgtech, I’ve been silently following along with your wonderful story for the last few days. I don’t usually comment, but I felt compelled to due so after reading this ending, or better stated — cliffhanger. Please don’t leave this story this way. If this is complete and it really truly is the “end”, then at least give the readers a sequel. I’ve always wanted to see Shane and Carmen end up together, but not this way.I can certainly appreciate the way that you have portrayed both of their characters in your story. You’ve kept them true to form, yet I can’t help but believe that Shane is now ready to commit and sacrifice her outlandish unfaithful ways in order to be with Carmen – the true love of her life. Since much of your story followed some of the storyline from the show, I think that toward the end, Shane had matured. The old Shane would have never allowed Phyllis to drive her away from Molly, but she wanted to spare Molly. She put her own selfishness aside, and let Molly go.BR>If you feel inclined to do so — sequel that is… I would like to see/read her fight for Carmen — prove herself to Carmen – admit her undying love to Carmen and make things right with Mrs. Morales.Nevertheless, if this really is the “end” and you have no desire to write a sequel, then I just want to thank you for sharing your story and at lease giving us an ending with the two of them together — loose ends and all…Thx,