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“So what is the first thing you are going to do?”
“Sleep”
“Sleep, but you are in New York” and what do you mean by its November in New York”
“It’s cold over there, it’s definitely not L.A November, you never been to New York in November.
“No, I never been to New York period, all of my work is here, but it sounds cold.
Sloan smiled the smile that would make Carmen smile, and when Carmen went to say something the flight attendant called to start boarding the flight.
“Wow, that was fast, Carmen said
“Yes, it was” Sloan replied, Well I guess I see you in two weeks. Sloan gave Carmen a kiss on the cheek. Carmen look a Sloan puzzled.
“What was that for?”
“What?
“The kiss on the cheek” Carmen said with a small attitude behind her voice
Carmen looked at Sloan and her eyes began to water, she placed her hand on her cheek and kissed her on the lips. Sloan just bowed her head and looked at her feet.
“I will see you in two weeks, okay”
Carmen sniffled, “yeah, two weeks, I will be waiting for you”
“Carmen it’s only two weeks, it’s not forever.”
“Call me when you get there”
“I will”, Sloan began to board her nine hour flight, Carmen waited till the gate closed to leave the LAX.
CHAPTER XXXIII
Shane couldn’t take her mind off of Carmen; all she thought about was Carmen. What was she doing, what has been up too? She missed her, she needed to see her. Shane was in a daze. She didn’t notice Molly walk into the house.
“Shane” Molly called out
“Did you check the messages, because there is like two on the machine for you?”
Huh; What Um, “No” Shane went to the living room and placed a kiss on Molly’s lips
“Hugo boss called they want you to do another shoot for them”
“Oh, yea” Well im not going to do it, I hated doing that shit last time”
“It pays twenty thousand Shane, and you can really use the money, you can reopen the Wax
“I don’t know, maybe not wax but something similar, there will only be one wax, Shane said that with a smirk behind it.
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yay sharmen…glad they can’t stay away from each other but not glad that they both still have girlfriends…great chapter…PPS!
Surgtech, I’ve been silently following along with your wonderful story for the last few days. I don’t usually comment, but I felt compelled to due so after reading this ending, or better stated — cliffhanger. Please don’t leave this story this way. If this is complete and it really truly is the “end”, then at least give the readers a sequel. I’ve always wanted to see Shane and Carmen end up together, but not this way.I can certainly appreciate the way that you have portrayed both of their characters in your story. You’ve kept them true to form, yet I can’t help but believe that Shane is now ready to commit and sacrifice her outlandish unfaithful ways in order to be with Carmen – the true love of her life. Since much of your story followed some of the storyline from the show, I think that toward the end, Shane had matured. The old Shane would have never allowed Phyllis to drive her away from Molly, but she wanted to spare Molly. She put her own selfishness aside, and let Molly go.BR>If you feel inclined to do so — sequel that is… I would like to see/read her fight for Carmen — prove herself to Carmen – admit her undying love to Carmen and make things right with Mrs. Morales.Nevertheless, if this really is the “end” and you have no desire to write a sequel, then I just want to thank you for sharing your story and at lease giving us an ending with the two of them together — loose ends and all…Thx,