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London to LA Ch11
Dana – I know, we are taking it slow, rebuilding our friendship and then see what happens
Jake comes into the room
Jake – hi Dana, dad mums awake
Will – great I’ll go help her up and help her dress, help yourself to coffee Dana, she wont be long
Jake – hey Dana you wanna play x-box
Dana – sure Jake
Dana and Jake go into the sitting room and settle down to play. Will goes into Alices bedroom.
Will – morning sleepy
Alice – morning, I’ve overslept, is Dana here yet?
Will – yeah she’s just got here, its ok though Jake is entertaining her. Come on you, lets get you into the shower and ready for your date.
Alice – its not a date Will
Will – yeah whatever you say Al, it is so a date
Alice – no its not – smirking
Will helps Alice shower and get dressed, after some time they appear in the sitting room. Dana and Jake are sat on the floor in front of the TV frantically playing a game on the x-box. Jake is well and truly beating Dana.
Jake – yay I win again, Dana you need to practice, you can come and play anytime you want, cant she mum
Alice – of course she can honey, looks like she needs the practice
Dana – ha ha, don’t worry I’ll beat you one day kiddo
Alice – sorry to have kept you waiting
Dana – no worries, you sure you want to go out, I mean if you don’t feel to good or you’re tired?
Alice – I’m good, it’ll be nice to get out. Ok Jake you ready
Jake – yep just gotta put my shoes on
Alice – so Dana where are we off to today
Dana – well I’ve been thinking
Alice – go careful there Dane
Dana – smiles at Alice – as I said I’ve been thinking and I thought that I would let Jake decide, so Jake so you want to go to the zoo, or the science museum, or maybe see some cool dinosaurs?
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(36 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
I’m melting here!! Could Jake get any cuter?!! I agree with ClosetDana, I just love how he acts around Dana (and she acts around him…getting competitive over an Xbox-game…aww, so cute). Alice seems to recover quite well…although she still has a long way to go. I hope she will regain strength in her leg and she will be able to get out of the wheelchair. Great to see that Dana and Alice are getting well acquainted again. I wonder how ‘hurricane’ Lenore will intervene in Alice’s life. :)
I love them ~ and Jake too!
Love this story. Jake and Dana gets along so well. Love how Dana said that Jake was a mimi Alice. thanks
Ahh wonderful and lovely, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story so much I just hope that alice will make a full recovery and that her and dana will find there way back to each other please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next and great update
Another great chapter I love that Jake and Dana are getting close very nice interaction between them. The date was sweet, I’m also anxious to see Alice and Dana on a date alone. I also like that Alice got tired, it’s unrealistic to have an abundance of energy after a surgery like that so it’s cool to see a bit of realism. A sweet way to end the chapter with Dana holding Alice. Great job all around! (so does this mean I have to post again to keep up with you?) :)
wonderful, perfect, so amazing, please continue!!!
So sweet, love it! Please continue this story soon xxx