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    London to LA Ch11

     

    Dana – I know, we are taking it slow, rebuilding our friendship and then see what happens

     

    Jake comes into the room

     

    Jake – hi Dana,  dad mums awake

     

    Will – great I’ll go help her up and help her dress, help yourself to coffee Dana, she wont be long

     

    Jake – hey Dana you wanna play x-box

     

    Dana – sure Jake

     

    Dana and Jake go into the sitting room and settle down to play. Will goes into Alices bedroom.

     

    Will – morning sleepy

     

    Alice – morning, I’ve overslept, is Dana here yet?

     

    Will – yeah she’s just got here, its ok though Jake is entertaining her.  Come on you, lets get you into the shower and ready for your date.

     

    Alice – its not a date Will

     

    Will – yeah whatever you say Al, it is so a date

     

    Alice – no its not – smirking

     

    Will helps Alice shower and get dressed, after some time they appear in the sitting room.  Dana and Jake are sat on the floor in front of the TV frantically playing a game on the x-box.  Jake is well and truly beating Dana.

     

    Jake – yay I win again, Dana you need to practice, you can come and play anytime you want, cant she mum

     

    Alice – of course she can honey, looks like she needs the practice

     

    Dana – ha ha, don’t worry I’ll beat you one day kiddo

     

    Alice – sorry to have kept you waiting

     

    Dana – no worries, you sure you want to go out, I mean if you don’t feel to good or you’re tired?

     

    Alice – I’m good, it’ll be nice to get out.  Ok Jake you ready

     

    Jake – yep just gotta put my shoes on

     

    Alice – so Dana where are we off to today

     

    Dana – well I’ve been thinking

     

    Alice – go careful there Dane

     

    Dana – smiles at Alice – as I said I’ve been thinking and I thought that I would let Jake decide, so Jake so you want to go to the zoo, or the science museum, or maybe see some cool dinosaurs?

    Comments

    1. I’m melting here!! Could Jake get any cuter?!! I agree with ClosetDana, I just love how he acts around Dana (and she acts around him…getting competitive over an Xbox-game…aww, so cute). Alice seems to recover quite well…although she still has a long way to go. I hope she will regain strength in her leg and she will be able to get out of the wheelchair. Great to see that Dana and Alice are getting well acquainted again. I wonder how ‘hurricane’ Lenore will intervene in Alice’s life. :)

    2. I love this story so much I just hope that alice will make a full recovery and that her and dana will find there way back to each other please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next and great update

    3. Another great chapter I love that Jake and Dana are getting close very nice interaction between them. The date was sweet, I’m also anxious to see Alice and Dana on a date alone. I also like that Alice got tired, it’s unrealistic to have an abundance of energy after a surgery like that so it’s cool to see a bit of realism. A sweet way to end the chapter with Dana holding Alice. Great job all around! (so does this mean I have to post again to keep up with you?) :)

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