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London to LA Ch11
Jake – yay dad, get the TV on
Alice – well that’s my cue to escape before the noise deafens me
Dana – you wanna go to the Planet Al for a couple of hours and let these two watch the game.
Alice – yeah that would be good, Will, when the games done don’t forget we are going to Shane and Carmen’s later, jakes gonna need a bath before we drop him off at Bette and Tina’s.
Will – yeah, yeah Al, games on see you later
Alice – talk to yourself Al
Dana and Alice leave the house and head down to the Planet
Alice – thanks for helping me escape Dane
Dana – my pleasure, I love spending time with you, you know that
Alice – they get a little noisy when the football is on, I’ve even been dragged to watch a couple of matches
Dana – oh my god, Alice going to a game – laughing
Alice – yeah I know scary huh!, truth is I actually quite enjoyed it, don’t tell anyone though
Dana – your secret is safe with me Al
They manage to find a parking spot not to far from the café, as Dana pushes Alice into the Planet, Alice sees her reflection in the window
Alice – god I look like shit!
Dana – no you don’t Al, you look beautiful as always
Alice – thank you, so do you hun.
They find a table and kit spots them and comes over to say hi.
Kit – hey my two favorite ladies, good to see you girl, its been to long
Dana – hi kit, wow its busy today
Kit – yeah business is good. So what brings you both out today. I wasn’t expecting to see anyone today, because of the party tonight
Alice – well the boys have found a channel showing the soccer. England are playing so we escaped the noise.
Kit – ah men and their games, bless them, what can I get you, on the house
Alice – thank you, tea for me please
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(36 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
I’m melting here!! Could Jake get any cuter?!! I agree with ClosetDana, I just love how he acts around Dana (and she acts around him…getting competitive over an Xbox-game…aww, so cute). Alice seems to recover quite well…although she still has a long way to go. I hope she will regain strength in her leg and she will be able to get out of the wheelchair. Great to see that Dana and Alice are getting well acquainted again. I wonder how ‘hurricane’ Lenore will intervene in Alice’s life. :)
I love them ~ and Jake too!
Love this story. Jake and Dana gets along so well. Love how Dana said that Jake was a mimi Alice. thanks
Ahh wonderful and lovely, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story so much I just hope that alice will make a full recovery and that her and dana will find there way back to each other please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next and great update
Another great chapter I love that Jake and Dana are getting close very nice interaction between them. The date was sweet, I’m also anxious to see Alice and Dana on a date alone. I also like that Alice got tired, it’s unrealistic to have an abundance of energy after a surgery like that so it’s cool to see a bit of realism. A sweet way to end the chapter with Dana holding Alice. Great job all around! (so does this mean I have to post again to keep up with you?) :)
wonderful, perfect, so amazing, please continue!!!
So sweet, love it! Please continue this story soon xxx