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You (Part the Fifty-Fourth)
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“Come here,” Alice said in that same tone of voice, and Dana wouldn’t have disobeyed for the world. Just the way Alice’s voice sounded almost did her in on the spot. She swallowed and walked slowly toward the bed, the intensity between the two of them building with every second that passed. When she was close enough, Alice reached out and grabbed her arm, drawing her in roughly and holding her close. Dana could feel her trembling.
It was more than obvious that all Alice wanted to do was rip the shirt off Dana and ravage her, but she tried to hold back for Dana’s sake, trying to slow her hands down. Dana let her hands wander gently but pretty aimlessly for all of twenty seconds before she took Alice’s right hand and shoved it under her shirt, bringing it up to make it squeeze her breast. “Touch me, Al. I want you to touch me,” Dana muttered, kissing her harder. Alice moaned into her mouth and obeyed, squeezing Dana’s breast hard. She then kissed her neck down to the shirt collar, her hands moving to unbutton the shirt. For every button that was opened, Alice nipped the skin underneath.
Dana moved to take the shirt off, but Alice stopped her hands, looking into her eyes with her own smoldering. “No, I want you to leave it on,” she whispered, removing Dana’s pants in one swift movement and kissing her again, pushing her rather roughly down onto the bed.
While Dana was a little turned on by the aggression, she got a little worried looking into Alice’s eyes. They were filled with overwhelming desire, but there was a strange sort of detachment in them…as if Alice was somewhere else. It was all the more disconcerting since Alice was being a hell of a lot more intense and rough than she usually was, and for Dana it was a welcome change. She missed feeling wanted. Sure, she knew that Alice still wanted her, still desired her, and all that, but it had been forever since she’d actually felt that desire in her touch. Alice hadn’t been rough with her since the cancer and to be quite honest, Dana missed it a little. It was hard not to know she was wanted when Alice was basically doing whatever she felt like. Ever since the cancer, Alice had been gentle, and while it was nice and loving and all the rest of it, sometimes Dana had missed this raw display of passion. So she was concerned at the faraway look in Alice’s eyes, although the burn of hands and lips pressing into her skin was driving her crazy.
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OMG, the return of the white oxford, YAY!!! I am glad to see Dana voicing her wants to Alice. Too bad Alice is still treating her like a victim, rather than a survivor. I’m sure they will work through it though. And there’s nothing like defacing a billboard to bring everyone together, haha!
“Socks decided to tag along, and jumped out of her cat bed to walk directly under Alice’s feet down the hallway.” I can’t stop grinning and love that Socks. On a more serious note, I totally comprehend the fear and concern A had. D was right about seeking help. Unfortunately A was forever so stubborn fixing things her own way. I hope she would change her mind going to stay with H for a few days, instead go seek professional help. I do agree that a short separation would do them some good. D also needed work on her anger and not explode like that each time they ran into a problem. I enjoyed the billboard scene with AlShaDane supporting each other. Thanks MT for another well written chapter which by the way make whole lot of sense.
Excellent chapter, MT! My poor girls… I can see both viewpoints. Dana must feel more alive than she has since leaving the hospital now that she has the possibility of getting back into tennis in some form. It must really hurt to have that negated by Alice’s treatment of her. That being said, she shouldn’t have lit into Alice like she did. Alice has a right to be concerned — especially the day after Dana was so exhausted. I am anxiously waiting to see where you take this. I know they are in good hands. Oh, and the sex? Hot! I hope the oxford makes frequent appearances. Thanks for the update!
Again, you have surpassed yourself with a great chapter. just hope that Alice can get through this feeling and get back to her wonderful self. Loved the billboard!! PPS.
great chap muted!! i enjoyed the drama so entertaining…..i feel like dana is being a little selfish rite now poor al but thats me pps!!!!! can’t get enough :)
Once again a late response, sorry ’bout that. Great chapter. I’m a little torn on whose side I should be. I understand both Dana and Alice. I get each of their argumentations, but I think after this chapter I understand Dana’s point a bit more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!b. ps.: Socks is cute!
I really hope they can get through this, which I am sure they will! I know we need Angst, but I also love happy Danish too! Thank You for the update! Great Stuff!
I really loved this chapter. It’s unrealistic to think that if Dana had survived things would have been blissfully happy with no complications. You have created a story which allows us to see them as real people in the real world struggling with the difficult issues in their way…I love it and want more!!!