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You (Part the Fifty-Fourth)
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“I love feeling you inside me,” Dana growled. It was barely comprehensible through the lust in her voice, but Alice heard every word perfectly. She thrust harder still, alternately kissing Dana and biting her neck, her collarbone, and her nipple. Dana wasn’t just laying there, either. Alice’s breasts would probably both have deep bruises on them in the morning from the way Dana kept moving each hand from its grip on Alice’s back to massage them roughly.
As she heard Dana’s moans get a little more urgent, Alice brought the heel of her hand in contact with Dana’s clit as she added another finger. Dana gasped and bit into Alice’s shoulder. “Let go,” she whispered into Alice’s ear, biting the lobe as she felt Alice’s pace increase again. “Don’t hold back on me, Al. It’s okay,” she murmured with some difficulty as she met Alice’s eyes, which closed as she finally gave up trying to be gentle and thrust into Dana as hard as she could. Dana had been preparing herself for pain, and she was happy that she got exactly the opposite sensation. Watching Alice let go like she hadn’t in months, along with the pressure on her clit and Alice’s fingers touching all the right places inside her, sent Dana into an orgasm that almost made her black out. When she came back to herself a little, she realized that she’d completely soaked the sheets, and the evidence of Alice’s orgasm was all over her leg.
“I love you,” Dana whispered, pulling Alice close to her and holding her there as their breathing slowed.
“I love you too, and I’m so sorry,” Alice replied after a minute of thought.
Dana sighed. “You don’t have anything to apologize for, Al. I told you I wanted to feel you want me, didn’t I? You’re not the only person who likes being fucked hard every now and then, so quit acting like you did something wrong. If I hadn’t wanted it, I wouldn’t have told you I did.”
“I shouldn’t have lost control like that, though. I’ve been trying to be so gentle with you…”
“I keep telling you you don’t have to be!” Dana exploded. “I hate it that you treat me like some kind of fucking porcelain doll. I liked it, Al. If I didn’t, or if you hurt me, I’d fucking tell you! You don’t have to be in control all the time, Alice. I don’t know why you feel like you have to be perfect around me. I never asked you to be perfect. I hate it that you walk on fucking eggshells around me, Al.”
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OMG, the return of the white oxford, YAY!!! I am glad to see Dana voicing her wants to Alice. Too bad Alice is still treating her like a victim, rather than a survivor. I’m sure they will work through it though. And there’s nothing like defacing a billboard to bring everyone together, haha!
“Socks decided to tag along, and jumped out of her cat bed to walk directly under Alice’s feet down the hallway.” I can’t stop grinning and love that Socks. On a more serious note, I totally comprehend the fear and concern A had. D was right about seeking help. Unfortunately A was forever so stubborn fixing things her own way. I hope she would change her mind going to stay with H for a few days, instead go seek professional help. I do agree that a short separation would do them some good. D also needed work on her anger and not explode like that each time they ran into a problem. I enjoyed the billboard scene with AlShaDane supporting each other. Thanks MT for another well written chapter which by the way make whole lot of sense.
Excellent chapter, MT! My poor girls… I can see both viewpoints. Dana must feel more alive than she has since leaving the hospital now that she has the possibility of getting back into tennis in some form. It must really hurt to have that negated by Alice’s treatment of her. That being said, she shouldn’t have lit into Alice like she did. Alice has a right to be concerned — especially the day after Dana was so exhausted. I am anxiously waiting to see where you take this. I know they are in good hands. Oh, and the sex? Hot! I hope the oxford makes frequent appearances. Thanks for the update!
Again, you have surpassed yourself with a great chapter. just hope that Alice can get through this feeling and get back to her wonderful self. Loved the billboard!! PPS.
great chap muted!! i enjoyed the drama so entertaining…..i feel like dana is being a little selfish rite now poor al but thats me pps!!!!! can’t get enough :)
Once again a late response, sorry ’bout that. Great chapter. I’m a little torn on whose side I should be. I understand both Dana and Alice. I get each of their argumentations, but I think after this chapter I understand Dana’s point a bit more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!b. ps.: Socks is cute!
I really hope they can get through this, which I am sure they will! I know we need Angst, but I also love happy Danish too! Thank You for the update! Great Stuff!
I really loved this chapter. It’s unrealistic to think that if Dana had survived things would have been blissfully happy with no complications. You have created a story which allows us to see them as real people in the real world struggling with the difficult issues in their way…I love it and want more!!!