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You (Part the Fifty-Fourth)
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“Baby,” Dana gasped, shutting her eyes tightly against the welcome pain of Alice’s teeth on her skin. Just that word seemed to snap Alice out of her amorous fog, and she looked down at Dana with an expression like shame.
“I’m sorry,” she muttered, moving off of Dana and reaching out her hand to help her up. Dana just looked at her in confusion. “I didn’t mean to hurt you, Dana. I’m so sorry,” she said in a whisper, not meeting Dana’s eyes and sitting up, drawing the comforter around her shoulders, which were still bare seeing as she hadn’t gotten dressed since waking up.
“Wait, Al…what are you talking about?” Dana asked, genuinely confused. “You didn’t hurt me, sweetie. I’m fine.”
“But I pretty much just threw you on the bed. And then you made a noise like I’d hurt you,” Alice said quietly.
“No, you didn’t hurt me. Nothing more than I could handle. You’re not gonna break me, Alice. Do you understand that? You can have sex with me without worrying about hurting me, okay? You really can. I promise,” Dana replied, taking Alice’s face in her hands and forcing her to meet her eyes.
Alice tried to look away, but Dana held her still and kissed her, pulling her down on the bed on top of her. “Be with me, Al,” she begged. “Don’t be so far away. I want to feel you want me.” At this, Alice did look at her, and seeing the genuine desire and love in Dana’s eyes, she gave a faint smile and kissed her.
“Fuck me, Al. I want you to fuck me hard,” Dana said between moans as Alice started to move over her. “I want it to be like it used to, Alice.”
Alice growled into her ear, and then pulled back so she could look into Dana’s eyes as she kept moving against her, kissing her hard and touching her the way she used to, without worrying about whether or not she was causing pain or any kind of stress. Dana arched up into her, desperate for more contact. Alice moaned when she felt just how wet Dana was, and slid into her easily.
“Harder,” Dana gasped as Alice thrust into her rough and fast and almost desperately. She bit Dana’s neck as she increased the pace of her hand, grasping and holding Dana’s breast with the other. Dana was practically clawing at her back, but it felt so good that Alice didn’t care. She was too caught up in the sound of Dana’s gasps and the feel of her skin to even give it much thought.
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OMG, the return of the white oxford, YAY!!! I am glad to see Dana voicing her wants to Alice. Too bad Alice is still treating her like a victim, rather than a survivor. I’m sure they will work through it though. And there’s nothing like defacing a billboard to bring everyone together, haha!
“Socks decided to tag along, and jumped out of her cat bed to walk directly under Alice’s feet down the hallway.” I can’t stop grinning and love that Socks. On a more serious note, I totally comprehend the fear and concern A had. D was right about seeking help. Unfortunately A was forever so stubborn fixing things her own way. I hope she would change her mind going to stay with H for a few days, instead go seek professional help. I do agree that a short separation would do them some good. D also needed work on her anger and not explode like that each time they ran into a problem. I enjoyed the billboard scene with AlShaDane supporting each other. Thanks MT for another well written chapter which by the way make whole lot of sense.
Excellent chapter, MT! My poor girls… I can see both viewpoints. Dana must feel more alive than she has since leaving the hospital now that she has the possibility of getting back into tennis in some form. It must really hurt to have that negated by Alice’s treatment of her. That being said, she shouldn’t have lit into Alice like she did. Alice has a right to be concerned — especially the day after Dana was so exhausted. I am anxiously waiting to see where you take this. I know they are in good hands. Oh, and the sex? Hot! I hope the oxford makes frequent appearances. Thanks for the update!
Again, you have surpassed yourself with a great chapter. just hope that Alice can get through this feeling and get back to her wonderful self. Loved the billboard!! PPS.
great chap muted!! i enjoyed the drama so entertaining…..i feel like dana is being a little selfish rite now poor al but thats me pps!!!!! can’t get enough :)
Once again a late response, sorry ’bout that. Great chapter. I’m a little torn on whose side I should be. I understand both Dana and Alice. I get each of their argumentations, but I think after this chapter I understand Dana’s point a bit more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!b. ps.: Socks is cute!
I really hope they can get through this, which I am sure they will! I know we need Angst, but I also love happy Danish too! Thank You for the update! Great Stuff!
I really loved this chapter. It’s unrealistic to think that if Dana had survived things would have been blissfully happy with no complications. You have created a story which allows us to see them as real people in the real world struggling with the difficult issues in their way…I love it and want more!!!