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The call to her arms, Chapter 1
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But she quickly recovered and resolved that her reaction was probably due to the relief that the sudden intervention had induced.
The brunette was still looking at her with intent and Tina immediately understood her silent plea to play along.
“Hey…” She finally let out with a bright smile, catching up with the act, “Oh well, I guess I just got lost in that huge park…”
The woman nodded and mirrored her smile,
“Yes you did…”
Then her smile widened and reached her eyes,
“But I have found you now!”
There was that warmth again… And why was her heart beating so fast?
Tina glanced at the German soldiers.
… That was probably why.
The woman suddenly turned to the officer, and let out a bright smile.
“ Colonel Zimmermann, what a nice surprise!… When I didn’t see you last night I thought you had gone back to Berlin.”
Tina cringed and her heart sank. Fear took hold of her again. What the hell was going on?… One moment, the brunette was coming to her rescue, and the next she was actually addressing her enemy as one of her close acquaintances?
The blonde clenched her fist around the handle of her purse, and her suspicions surfaced again. Her father’s words came to the forth of her mind. No, she would certainly not make the same mistake twice!
Yet at this moment, she had no choice but watch the scene, which held her fate, unfold before her.
“Good morning, Miss Porter…” The Colonel greeted the woman, “… Well, some internal affairs held me back at the Kommandantur yesterday. “
“Oh well, nothing too unpleasant, I hope?” The brunette asked.
The officer looked at her intently for a few seconds. The woman smiled and she tilted her head in a flirty way. That seemed to relax him a little.
“No, of course not…” He replied with a smile, “… And if you would allow me, I would be more than delighted to offer you a drink on Friday night.”
The brunette grinned at him.
“That would be my pleasure, Colonel.”
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I just want to be the first one to welcome you back sweetie! I could lie and pretend that I did not know anything about this…. But I won’t… I am so glad to see your name on the front page again that I am grinning from ear to ear…. Reading this agin brought as many goosebumps as it did the first 20 times that I read the chapter the day you sent it to me! You are an amazing writer with a rare sensibility which shows in your life and in your words….. I cannot wait to see where you are going to take us with this, my stomach is knotted with anticipation… :0) Kxxxxxx
Oh my gosh, I love it!!! Please continue because I’m hooked. PPS.
How well written and the way you have already begun developing the tension is such a good way to capture this reader’s interest. I look forward to the next post tension and all!
Wow, you are amazing and this was amazing too! Can’t wait to see where you take us with this!
wow… loved it… loved how you started it… and then back to the beginning… can’t wait for more…pps
Great start! and it’s obvious this will be a grand story! Can’t wait for more, hope it’ll be long as this chap;)
Hey guys, you all read fast. Welcome back,Kw. 20 pages of beautiful words and exquisitely woven story. What could a girl ask more? A box of tissue at hand, I’m ready for the journey.
Great idea. Looking forward to reading this.
Loved it, cant wait to read more.
Oh Wow, how exciting. The beginning made me shed a few tears as I know it will when we get to that point in the story. Hope they can find that little bastard that took her money, the ass. Another fab story from you. Well done. Thanks.
“Cure All” remains one of my all-time favorites, so I’m very much looking forward to this. What a rich, wonderful start!
Wow what everyone said x 10^n. Thank you and welcome back
What a wonderful start to a story. I can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for giving us what looks like another excellent story. Thank you.
Thrilled to see your name next to a new story! 20 pages seemed to go by in a blink as I was riveted to every word. Sad, but touching start. Fantastic premise and I can’t wait to see where you take them! Welcome back!!
Glad to see you back with a new story. Excellent start. Already looking forward to more.
oh my god… another great writer in the making!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please continue…. this is so great!
Thanks so much for posting this story. You picked a very interesting time and location for this. Lots of tension, drama and heartbreak are inevitable given the circumstances. I hope Bette and Tina can find strength and solace in each other to get them through it all.
Hey K !! I’m so late in catching up with this new story of yours I’m ashamed ! Anyway, I believe you already know by now what I think of it, and what I think of your writing, but just wanted to drop in and say “YOU’RE A FRACKING ROCKSTAR !!!!” I mean, in case you didn’t know… ;) thank you for this new gift of a story.
Very Interesting. Love it. I am hooked my friend.
This is the beginning of a great love story.
My dad was stationed in England and got lost in France on a mission, the resistance got him out, it was one of the very few stories he told.
Sweet mother of pearl Kw – 20 pages to “set the scene”!?! It’s like Christmas come early (LOL). This is BRILLIANT! I’ve always had a fascination with WWII and Civil War based stories. The opening evokes an array of emotions that are so palpable and hint at the intrigue to come that it sucked me in right away. I’m looking forward to seeing where you take us on this journey. All I can say is Godspeed to our gals. Patiently but eagerly looking forward to your next chapter :)
Totally engrossing. I held my breath while reading. This story has the makings of a true tibette classic.
Hi Kw! So happy to see your name again in the front page ;-) and boy! What a beginning!! I am thrilled to read more.. And no matter how you said that it’s long chapter to make us understand the situations… Well.. I still can’t get it?! So would you post another long chapter again to make me have a better understanding of the situations? … :-p lol… You cant blame me for asking you this after being hooked by story and it’s worth a try I guess ;-) he3.. :o)
A new story from you is always a really nice surprise and what a start.Thank you.PPS