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The call to her arms, Chapter 1
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That gave her a few seconds to regain the slightest bit of composure, and trying as best as she could to hide her fear, she looked at him and managed a smile.
“Well, this is really silly…” she started, still pretending to search, “… But I seem to have forgotten them at my hotel… You see, I just arrived in Paris this morning, and I c…”
“You mean…” A cold and accent-tinted voice interrupted her, “… that you just arrived in the city and you actually don’t carry your identification documents with you?”
The owner of the dreadful voice stepped forward from behind the soldier, before he added with a smirk.
“That is very odd, don’t you think?”
The officer’s eyes were so cold and threatening that a shiver ran down her spine and she suddenly felt nauseous.
“Well…” She managed weakly, but her next words didn’t come. In fact, she didn’t even know what her next words should be in that moment.
She was losing it, and she knew it… She thought about Sam and Becky… She couldn’t let this happen… She couldn’t let them down… No, this couldn’t end like this…
What this really what fate had in store for her? Was this really the…
“THERE YOU ARE!!!”
The exclamation could have come from any mother in the park calling out to her child, but in that very moment and the angelic sound of that voice, Tina heard her salvation.
“I have been looking all over for you!”
She saw the soldiers turn in the direction of the owner of the voice who was walking toward them. And she did the same.
What she saw took her breath away, and for a few seconds, she thought that the woman really was a mother actually calling her child. Because she couldn’t explain why such a beautiful and elegant woman would interfere in her misfortune and participate in what looked very much like a rescue.
But as she came closer, the woman looked into her eyes in such a way that not only was Tina convinced that the newcomer was really addressing her, but in those few seconds, and as she stared back at the gorgeous curly-haired brunette, a strange and warm feeling started to course through her and she suddenly felt dizzy. She didn’t know what it was but it was something she had never felt before. And it startled her…
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I just want to be the first one to welcome you back sweetie! I could lie and pretend that I did not know anything about this…. But I won’t… I am so glad to see your name on the front page again that I am grinning from ear to ear…. Reading this agin brought as many goosebumps as it did the first 20 times that I read the chapter the day you sent it to me! You are an amazing writer with a rare sensibility which shows in your life and in your words….. I cannot wait to see where you are going to take us with this, my stomach is knotted with anticipation… :0) Kxxxxxx
Oh my gosh, I love it!!! Please continue because I’m hooked. PPS.
How well written and the way you have already begun developing the tension is such a good way to capture this reader’s interest. I look forward to the next post tension and all!
Wow, you are amazing and this was amazing too! Can’t wait to see where you take us with this!
wow… loved it… loved how you started it… and then back to the beginning… can’t wait for more…pps
Great start! and it’s obvious this will be a grand story! Can’t wait for more, hope it’ll be long as this chap;)
Hey guys, you all read fast. Welcome back,Kw. 20 pages of beautiful words and exquisitely woven story. What could a girl ask more? A box of tissue at hand, I’m ready for the journey.
Great idea. Looking forward to reading this.
Loved it, cant wait to read more.
Oh Wow, how exciting. The beginning made me shed a few tears as I know it will when we get to that point in the story. Hope they can find that little bastard that took her money, the ass. Another fab story from you. Well done. Thanks.
“Cure All” remains one of my all-time favorites, so I’m very much looking forward to this. What a rich, wonderful start!
Wow what everyone said x 10^n. Thank you and welcome back
What a wonderful start to a story. I can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for giving us what looks like another excellent story. Thank you.
Thrilled to see your name next to a new story! 20 pages seemed to go by in a blink as I was riveted to every word. Sad, but touching start. Fantastic premise and I can’t wait to see where you take them! Welcome back!!
Glad to see you back with a new story. Excellent start. Already looking forward to more.
oh my god… another great writer in the making!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please continue…. this is so great!
Thanks so much for posting this story. You picked a very interesting time and location for this. Lots of tension, drama and heartbreak are inevitable given the circumstances. I hope Bette and Tina can find strength and solace in each other to get them through it all.
Hey K !! I’m so late in catching up with this new story of yours I’m ashamed ! Anyway, I believe you already know by now what I think of it, and what I think of your writing, but just wanted to drop in and say “YOU’RE A FRACKING ROCKSTAR !!!!” I mean, in case you didn’t know… ;) thank you for this new gift of a story.
Very Interesting. Love it. I am hooked my friend.
This is the beginning of a great love story.
My dad was stationed in England and got lost in France on a mission, the resistance got him out, it was one of the very few stories he told.
Sweet mother of pearl Kw – 20 pages to “set the scene”!?! It’s like Christmas come early (LOL). This is BRILLIANT! I’ve always had a fascination with WWII and Civil War based stories. The opening evokes an array of emotions that are so palpable and hint at the intrigue to come that it sucked me in right away. I’m looking forward to seeing where you take us on this journey. All I can say is Godspeed to our gals. Patiently but eagerly looking forward to your next chapter :)
Totally engrossing. I held my breath while reading. This story has the makings of a true tibette classic.
Hi Kw! So happy to see your name again in the front page ;-) and boy! What a beginning!! I am thrilled to read more.. And no matter how you said that it’s long chapter to make us understand the situations… Well.. I still can’t get it?! So would you post another long chapter again to make me have a better understanding of the situations? … :-p lol… You cant blame me for asking you this after being hooked by story and it’s worth a try I guess ;-) he3.. :o)
A new story from you is always a really nice surprise and what a start.Thank you.PPS