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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 8)
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The kissing alone was better than we ever had before. Our aggressive dueling tongues were like throwing gasoline on a roaring fire that only intensified the burning flames inside. She covered my face with kisses, short wet kisses, then she licked my cheek, over to one of my earlobes, biting it, earring and all until I wanted to cry out in pain but she followed it up, with a soft, tender kiss on my neck, followed by several more, leaving trails of wetness in her path, going down to my breasts.
I do not think that either one of us felt the first rain drops. Just a few at first and then progressively more. She had one of my breasts cupped in her hand, circling her tongue around the nipple, then sucking it, then kissing it.
When it started to shower, she came up to my mouth again with a whole new barrage of kisses. The rain became our music drowning out everything else but the noises of our passion.
I had my arms around her back, sinking my fingers and nails deep into her skin when she got totally on top of me. We thrashed our bodies against each other as if there was no time for anything else. Then she rolled us over and I was on the top with the rain coming down heavy on my back. She had landed on the flower leis and crushed them under her which now emitted an intense orchid fragrance. When she rolled us back I felt flower petals and oils on her skin and the smell of it in the air was extremely erotic.
She writhed against me and I squirmed under her as we wildly ground ourselves into each other. I wrapped my legs around her legs and we managed a sudden rhythm, massaging our clits to a climatic finish.
It was crazy. It was wonderful. We both went limp at the same time but we never let go of each other. She dropped her head along side mine. Both of our hearts were pounding hard, in near cadence with the driving rain as we laid there trying to catch our breath.
Slowly we came down.
Ever so slowly.
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it really worked!!!!!!!!….im first now im going to read it..wooohhoooo
September, I keep a close watch over the story when I can and today I can so thanks a lot for the boost.
YES YES YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS. I CAN’T BELIEVE IT finally…. doing a happy dance here. I wonder if bette noticed that sissee always thought about her when she fucked (not made love) to someone else. Great chapter it made me feel all these wonderfull things. I can’t wait to see how there night together goes…well I do know but I can’t wait to read it. I bet that Sissee will talk about how she feels during that emotional love making session that will take hours and hours of slow bonding together again. Amazing work..thank you!!
ps I forgot to say…that was a dangerouse place to make love..I don’t mean to get caught but the fact under that tree before you know it you have a coconut on your head…DANGEROUSE!!
September, Thanks for your enthusiastic response to the chapter. As for wondering if Bette realized that Sissee thought about her when she was intimate with other people, I think it is safe to say that during those times Sissee simply wished it was Bette who was there. And yes, you’re right about the threat of coconuts falling but with them in the throes of passion, do you really think they would have felt a coconut fall on their heads? They would just think it was the power of love hitting them from all directions!
Yahooooo! Sissee and Bette are finally together, getting something something after so many years of yearning and waiting (of Sissee). I need to tell you Sissee (the author/writer), this chapter was again beautifully written with your descriptions re: the rain, the song of Kris K (I really don’t know he is a singer, just know he’s an actor), mixed with B & S’s love-making adventure and intense feelings of one another. Wow, that’s all I can say now. Can’t wait for more adventures on the next chapter.
FINALLY!!!! It was worth the wait. Hate that they got all wet, but they didn’t seem to mind. Hope they can make their way back in so the slow love can continue & continue & continue……. Thanks Sissee!
Sissee, I hate to be as wet a blanket as the one you were on with Bette, but you are/were married at this time, weren’t you? …As Dr. John sang, “Cheaters never win, and a winner don’t never cheat.” …Bette needs a friend and you need/needed to go home to your husband and kids. Thanks
Kerbergin47, I know! I know! I know what you are saying about “finally”. But I am so happy you thought it was, “worth the wait.” You have certainly been loyal to this story and that is very important to me.
Techgal, I guess I have to take the bad with the good. While everyone is happy about Bette and Sissee finally getting back together romantically, you have shown your displeasure because Sissee , the character is married. No one can deny that fact. Yes, that makes her a cheater , just like Bette was a cheater with Candace, just like Tina was cheating on line with Daddy Oh and flirting on the job with subordinates . In fact, pick a character in TLW and all of us would be hard put to find someone chaste amongst them, even though we have loved this show since 2004. And yes, you are right that Bette escaped to go to Maui with a friend but it is what it is. When feelings last as long as theirs have, who can really and truly blame them for acting on it. I can assure you, techgal, they will answer for it and it won’t be easy for them. Meanwhile, thanks for your comment. For some darn reason I like you. Maybe it’s your name.
Bette’s Babe, Thank you for seeing how the words were put down on the page, over and above the content. I appreciate your slant on it. Oh yes, KK is a singer but he was more of a poet in his songs that were very original, rather than well sung. Somehow he got away with that voice because he had so much charisma that still comes through with his acting. As for you looking forward to more adventures, I will keep them coming and hope you keep enjoying them.
BetterwithBette, Thank you very much for your sincere comments. I appreciate that you get it. You get their love story, in spite of their circumstances. It’s very nice to be encouraged.
Wonderfully written, as alwaysEven after all these years, you can feel the love they have for each other.Thank you for sharing your writing with us.