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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 8)
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Then suddenly we heard voices coming around the far corner of the porch and we separated so abruptly it was as if we both got electric shocks. When we saw a man and a woman walking briskly toward us we walked quickly back toward my bedroom and stood outside. When they walked by they smiled broadly and the man explained, “Kurt said 15 times around is a mile, so we’re gonna try it!”
Bette and I conjured up a wan smile in response and when they passed, Bette uttered, “Fuck!” under her breath. We looked at each other in sheer frustration. On impulse I gestured out over the expanse of lawn behind the house where it was pitch black. “Let’s go out there….” I offered.
She looked in that direction squinting into the darkness and said, “On the grass?”
“There’s a blanket in my closet.”
She took a few steps and looked down, over the railing. We were above the garage which was part of the house. She glanced back at me. “Okay, I’ll go first and you drop the blanket down when I signal you.”
In a flash she was gone, along the porch to the wide steps and down. I hurried to the closet, hoping to beat that couple before they got around again. I picked up the blanket and rushed it to the railing. Bette was standing below looking up, signaling me to throw it. I threw it down and she caught it. Then I walked as nonchalantly as I could to the stairs. I knew I was passing people on that front top deck and then as I descended, I saw a cluster of them out on lawn chairs. I went as slowly as I could hoping not to be seen, just as Bette had sneaked by.
I made it. Then I walked past the garage and saw her near a pine tree. I joined her and we lit out across the lawn, giggling like school kids. It was indeed, suddenly funny. In fact Bette said, “I feel like we’re 16 years old sneaking off to get laid.” I laughed and told her, “No, we’re 43 years old, sneaking off to get laid.” That really set us off because we knew how ridiculous it was. We still had our leis around our neck and then swayed to and fro as we ran deeper into the black night.
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it really worked!!!!!!!!….im first now im going to read it..wooohhoooo
September, I keep a close watch over the story when I can and today I can so thanks a lot for the boost.
YES YES YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS. I CAN’T BELIEVE IT finally…. doing a happy dance here. I wonder if bette noticed that sissee always thought about her when she fucked (not made love) to someone else. Great chapter it made me feel all these wonderfull things. I can’t wait to see how there night together goes…well I do know but I can’t wait to read it. I bet that Sissee will talk about how she feels during that emotional love making session that will take hours and hours of slow bonding together again. Amazing work..thank you!!
ps I forgot to say…that was a dangerouse place to make love..I don’t mean to get caught but the fact under that tree before you know it you have a coconut on your head…DANGEROUSE!!
September, Thanks for your enthusiastic response to the chapter. As for wondering if Bette realized that Sissee thought about her when she was intimate with other people, I think it is safe to say that during those times Sissee simply wished it was Bette who was there. And yes, you’re right about the threat of coconuts falling but with them in the throes of passion, do you really think they would have felt a coconut fall on their heads? They would just think it was the power of love hitting them from all directions!
Yahooooo! Sissee and Bette are finally together, getting something something after so many years of yearning and waiting (of Sissee). I need to tell you Sissee (the author/writer), this chapter was again beautifully written with your descriptions re: the rain, the song of Kris K (I really don’t know he is a singer, just know he’s an actor), mixed with B & S’s love-making adventure and intense feelings of one another. Wow, that’s all I can say now. Can’t wait for more adventures on the next chapter.
FINALLY!!!! It was worth the wait. Hate that they got all wet, but they didn’t seem to mind. Hope they can make their way back in so the slow love can continue & continue & continue……. Thanks Sissee!
Sissee, I hate to be as wet a blanket as the one you were on with Bette, but you are/were married at this time, weren’t you? …As Dr. John sang, “Cheaters never win, and a winner don’t never cheat.” …Bette needs a friend and you need/needed to go home to your husband and kids. Thanks
Kerbergin47, I know! I know! I know what you are saying about “finally”. But I am so happy you thought it was, “worth the wait.” You have certainly been loyal to this story and that is very important to me.
Techgal, I guess I have to take the bad with the good. While everyone is happy about Bette and Sissee finally getting back together romantically, you have shown your displeasure because Sissee , the character is married. No one can deny that fact. Yes, that makes her a cheater , just like Bette was a cheater with Candace, just like Tina was cheating on line with Daddy Oh and flirting on the job with subordinates . In fact, pick a character in TLW and all of us would be hard put to find someone chaste amongst them, even though we have loved this show since 2004. And yes, you are right that Bette escaped to go to Maui with a friend but it is what it is. When feelings last as long as theirs have, who can really and truly blame them for acting on it. I can assure you, techgal, they will answer for it and it won’t be easy for them. Meanwhile, thanks for your comment. For some darn reason I like you. Maybe it’s your name.
Bette’s Babe, Thank you for seeing how the words were put down on the page, over and above the content. I appreciate your slant on it. Oh yes, KK is a singer but he was more of a poet in his songs that were very original, rather than well sung. Somehow he got away with that voice because he had so much charisma that still comes through with his acting. As for you looking forward to more adventures, I will keep them coming and hope you keep enjoying them.
BetterwithBette, Thank you very much for your sincere comments. I appreciate that you get it. You get their love story, in spite of their circumstances. It’s very nice to be encouraged.
Wonderfully written, as alwaysEven after all these years, you can feel the love they have for each other.Thank you for sharing your writing with us.