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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 78
Tina lifted Bette’s face to hers.
“Bette, baby, this was not that. ‘That’ is our past that we have dealt with. Yes, the ***** was connected to our past, and that’s exactly where I wanted to slap her to, to the past and the ***** out of our present or our future.”
Bette couldn’t help but smile.
“T?”
“Yes, babe.”
“You slapped the ***** out of her real good.”
“Why thank you, sweetie.”
“Now, can you tell me how this came about and what Susan was doing here?”
“Well, let me go and get Angelica. She’s at Shane’s. When I come back I’ll tell you everything.”
* * *
Susan followed Candace to her truck. She wanted to see firsthand that she got in and drove off.
“Candace, follow my suggestion, leave this town.”
“***** you, you lyin’ *****.”
“Well, for one, in your dreams you’ll ***** me; and two, I know who my parents are, but if it makes you feel any better, call me anything you want. But get your ***** loser ***** out of this town, or the next time – if you’d be stupid enough to even consider a next time – you may not be able to get up to walk to your truck.”
“What, you’re threatening me now?” The words were a bit garbled as Candace’s face was swollen and she was having a hard time talking.
“No, Candace, I’m not threatening you at all. I’m stating a fact. And if you want to test whether or not that fact is true, stick around. Get the ***** out of here. NOW.“
Candace started her old truck, slammed the accelerator to the floor and took off. To everyone’s knowledge, that was the last time anyone saw or heard from Candace Jewel. She apparently found some sense in her overly thick head.
* * *
Susan stood in the street and watched Candace’s truck speed off. When her truck disappeared around a corner, Susan went to her truck, got in and just sat for a few moments behind the wheel.
And what Susan didn’t see or in no way was aware of, was another set of eyes standing behind a car a short distance away.a pair of eyes that had become all too familiar with the characters in this dramatic play
TBC
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(24 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
RC…that was a great chapter. Tina slapping Candance..I thought she was going to slug her. LOL. Bette standing in the spot designated to her by Tina was funny and cute. Susan may have save Tina & Bette from Candance, but will she save them from Helena? I’m hoping she does for her and Dawn’s sake. For some reason…those eyes watching Susan are probably from Detective Al. LOL. She’s get to the bottom of this conspiracy. RC..thanks for the update. Loved it. So much action and drama.
OMg that bitch is playing double???? for a minute she deceived me..B&T have to et open eyes with that woman she is a snake..great chappy post soon thanks :o)
i said GODDAMN WHAT A RUSH..holy shit tina just regulated!!!
I hope it is reporter Al investigating the sly Susan
Whoa, Alpha Tina strikes again. Way to go Tina. I have my guesses as to who is watching from behind a car. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the post.
hmmm love this story…now its can’t be shane watching…she has the baby..i’m thinking its kit..she is also street wise… and B & T would take her word as gosbel…please continue
tina – did that feel good. sounded like it felt good. i could hear it all the way to utah. i bet bette loved watching that scene. thanks rc, you doing such a fantasmic job. hmmm, the eyes have it, huh? thanks.
Well done Tina for knocking Candyass, ass, Wonder who is waiting by the cars watching the scene unfold, it is probably Helena. I am so looking forward to see what happens please post asap.
RC,
A absolute stunner.
I can’t express how happy I am at Candace being bitch slapped by Tina and then by Susan.
Go gals, go!
As for the intrigue, it has not slowed and still captivating me with ever new twist and turn.
Just who is in the car? Helena? Peggy? Nancy?
The mystery continues.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Your Loyal Fan.
maybe Alice is watching or somebody for Peggy Peabody. who knows but can’t wait to find out. thanks for posting, pseud, love your exciting story!
oops, i know it you arceextl, forgive my mistake. :(
Wow what a story. I am enthralled with your tale as I have just caught up. It is quite the page turner as I could put this down. thanks for the telling and I anxiously await your next chapter.
Damnit woman! Why must you tease this way?!?!?! It’s hard enough that it was a short, but aswesome, chapter. And now you leave us hanging?
So cruel!
Susan tthe friend and protector of B&T, I DON’T think so. Now why would Candace not immediately so straight to Helena (swollen face and all) and report the her how Susan has double crossed her before she left town. I mean I would think that she add least want to walk away from this with something (Lets call it by it proper name REVENGE on Susan.), and I really think that B&T could have handled Candace themselves. I just take Tina to be someone who likes handling person things herself or at least within her circle of family, which Susan is not yet a member. Let’s hope that was Helena watching, please post again soon– really good stuff.
Ahhh the cycle never ends! As soon as one villain is sent away another enigmatic figure is lurking in the shadows. I’m glad Tina was able to give Candace her just desserts. Hopefully they won’t be too eager to trust Susan. Thanks, rc!
still love this story. Can’t wait for the bitch to get what she deserves.
post soon