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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 77
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Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 77
Previously
If Helena Peabody had an ounce of common sense, she’d heed the advice and warning of her mother and get off the ice quicklyit’s beginning to crack. What Peggy neglected to add to her warning is that people don’t last very long in icy cold water.
Susan talked with Tina during the week and they got it confirmed regarding Saturday night. Tina would tell Bette she would like a relaxing late afternoon and evening out by the pool; take Angelica to Kit’s and bring back a surprise for her. Except she won’t be going to Kit’s; she’ll be driving around the block and leaving Angelica with Shane and Carmen. Only way this won’t work is if Bette doesn’t stay on the patio.
This whole thing is such a lame idea in the first place, but it’s all Susan had to work with. People who don’t know anything about playing these kind of games should just cut their losses and go home. She didn’t know who was worse, Helena or Candace, in their obsession about Bette and Tina. None of my ***** business – I just want Candace out of the picture.
Susan contacted Candace to confirm once more it was a go for Saturday and they would touch base again Saturday in the morning for a time to meet.
Then Susan called Dawn. She promised she would call in a couple days just to touch base and those days have gone by.
“Hi.”
“Hi, hon. How are you out there in sunny
“Pretty sunny but I’ve been working so I don’t get to see too much of it.”
“Look, I know I can’t ask the whys of why you’re there, but can you at least tell me where in
“Sure. I’m in LA,
“I know that, honey. But are you all right? I’m worried about you.”
“There are nice people involved here. They remind me of us, babe. They went through some tough times apparently but are back on track – just like I’d like us to be.”
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great chapter. B&T are so cute. cant wait to see how this all plays out
as much as id like to see all these “women” as i use the term loosely, get theres. that means your story is coming to a close. hope you have something else in store for us. thanks.
OH COME ON 2 FOR TUESDAY… juat keep bette and tina safe… and i hope susan thinks twice and listens to what dawn said… keep the nice ones safe… money isn’t everything…love this story…and i don’t want you to ever stop… so finish this stoey line and move on to another…thanks…
rc, I’m a little sad that this story’s coming to an end to. No worries though, you could always start another one, right? *Wink wink nudge nudge* Hehe
Yay they’re getting married!! *Does little happy dance* I know that they have been for years but they might as well make it official. I can’t wait to see Candace fall flat on her face. I hope everything works out right! *Crosses fingers*
Love this. What in the heck is Alice conjuring up? Maybe she will get the connection of Susan to Helena before anything wild happens or before Susan can get Tina to Helena. Please let all the decils in this story go to jail or to Hell, preferably. Just so long as they are out of our girls hair. Great job. Post soon please. Thanks.
I agree with missyang.Let them get married already.The new story can bring drama of a married kind.Give Tina some Justine like qualities.
Just what is Candance up to? Damn Helena is definitely playing with fire. Susan promised Dawn to protect the nice ones…will she keep her promise? Let’s hope Susan takes the high road in the end and help Bette & Tina get rid of Helena for good. I really hope Al’s snooping sense kicks in and she finds out about Susan. RC…thanks for this DRAMA filled update — always a pleasure.
Glad to see you’ve posted RC….cant wait for the next chapter! This story is gooooood!!
Don’t let her get beat up to bad let her beat up somebody!!!!!!! Open the can of whip ass!!!!
we wait and wait ever so patiently for your story. it is a slow, painful and often good torture.
what the hell that bitch will do????..please let B&T get mariege in peace..lol.and please dont ruin the B&T relax bu the pool..lol..you mean..great chapter thanks :o)
God, let them get married! No more up-and-downs pls~~ Still great chapter, thanks.
Your story is great, i read it all last night (took me like 4 hours) and I’m so hooked up! Please continue soon…I’m going crazy just imagining what Hellena is up to!