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Just The Girl, Stories: Four Friends, Three Days, Two Brides and One Wedding (Part 2 of 3)
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It took another ten agonizing minutes before Alice stepped out of the washroom, looking worse for wear. She looked every part like someone who had spent the last few minutes hugging a toilet and emptying her insides out into it. She gazed at the disquieted expressions on the faces of her friends and consciously ran a hand through her damp tresses. “I feel disgusting. Do I look disgusting?”
An uncertain looked passed between the three women.
“Uh,” Shane scratched the side of her neck, evidently stalling. She flicked away her burnt cigarette and pushed herself up to her feet. She made a show of giving her bestfriend a good once over before placing a soothing hand on Alice’s shoulder. “It’s not too bad, Al. Hey, at least the way you feel inside matches the way you look outside. I know you’re big on symmetry.”
Sam almost swallowed the gum she was chewing.
Alice, as expected, scowled. “Want me to get sick all over you so that we’d match too?”
“I was kidding,” Shane stepped away. “You look breathtaking.”
“Thank you.”
“Literally. Here, have a mint.”
“Fuck off!”
“Aw, c’mon, I was only trying to make you laugh.” Shane’s smile was apologetic, even though everyone knew better. With cat-like reflexes, she caught the pack of tissue that Sam chucked in their direction and offered it to the blonde. “Peace?”
“Yeah, yeah, whatever.” Alice rolled her eyes, but took a couple of tissues all the same. When she was done dabbing her face free of the sweat and moisture that seemed to have pooled there, she turned to the two other girls. “So, let’s go? I don’t think I have anything left in my body for my stomach to heave out.”
“Sure?”
“Positive.” Alice answered Bette.
“You want some candy?” Sam offered, pulling out a couple of cherry-flavored candies from the pocket of her ultra-short shorts.
“Ugh,” Alice groaned, looking nauseous. “No thanks, I don’t think I’ll be able to eat fruit again for a long, long time.” She sighed. “I think I vomited a toilet bowl-full of fruit cocktail. It was vile.”
“I can imagine.” Sam made a face, stuffing her candies back in her pocket. She accepted Shane’s outstretched hand and allowed herself to be pulled up to her feet.
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Thanks for the update, loved it
Awesome stuff!! Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely excellent update. thank you. Loved every word.
great great.. I´ve miss this story please post very soon…
Excellent,soooo funny.Thank you for the update,PPS.
Ive missed your story, its so funny. please post soon.
OMG… i love this story… YJANK YOU SO MUCH for the updates… and yes what HAPPENS IN THE GRAND CANYON…stays in the grand Canyon… i will admit i do miss Tina in their adventures… can’t wait for part 3 of 3… please post when you can… Thx
Your last update was so long ago.I have read JTG from start to finish after it was recommended to me.It has been a most enjoyable read.One of the best FF i have read.I really hope you can find it in you to finish it off.I just can’t imagine what you will have happen on their actual Wedding Day laughs a plenty i would imagine so please post very soon.x
Thanks for updating. I laughed so much that my belly hurts. The scene with the strippers was hilarious. You have such amazing talent, Alchy.
Achy!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for that hilarious update. I remember the Shalice fake sex scandal loved it loved it loved it
I actually thought I would never see this story again, what a pleasant surprise
This was side achingly funny, so pleasant and so well written… I so enjoy your portrayal of the gang and I love your Bette…. I had lost hope to ever be acquainted with this lot again and I am so pleased that you found some time to write and post what is no doubt the most entertainment and epic story on this site…. Please don’t keep us waiting too long for the final instalment ! Thanks Alchy!
I’ve been waiting for this update like forever! it is the best Thanksgiving gift ever, so thank u ;DEvery time I read ur stories my kids thinks that I’m crazy because I laugh by myself and they wouldn’t guess why, LOL. the male strippers part was hilarious ;D
Thank you for updating this tale. I just loved it. Great for a good laugh this morning!
Wow!! I simply can’t stand not to laughed and snorted while reading your story :-D lol … Thanks for the update! Absolutely looking forward to the next update… Btw it’s so darn hilarious on their unbelievable experience.. Especially the one in grand canyon!! LOL…. :-D
Hi I have come back to check for your updates and disappointed to find none…hope you would post them soon. Thanks.
I hadn’t read this story since the first time it came out and I just have to say that re-reading it from begining to finish was just as enjoyable as I remember! This story is by far one of my favourite stories on this site and in existence.
Although I was a little sad to see that Part 3 of the wedding road trip never made an update. I would love to see this story continued one day. Thank you for your wonderful writing!