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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Two (a HYD-inspired fic)
Ouch. Blunt, much?
I look down on my lap and fight a sigh. As much as I wanted to take offense with his statement, I found that I could not. He had a point. My Tina was a brilliant girl, she would have gotten stellar grades in that small, relatively unknown public school in our small town. She would have been qualified enough to enter USC without having been educated in the pricey, top-seeded private school that was Redwind Academy. And Porter was right, I put my only child in a school that practically emptied my life savings with its high tuition fees just to ensure that she had a place in Harvard or Yale or any of those elite schools – which was my ultimate dream for her. Having only graduated high school, I wanted something different for my daughter. I wanted her to have a bright future, one that wasn’t confined in the four corners of a farm. I have always believed that if you were to dream, then dream big. So, I wanted the whole package for Tina – and that involved the country’s top schools. Yes, I was ambitious, but it stemmed from a good place – a place full of love and hopes for good things for the only person that I was living for.
Feeling that I had no response for his statement, he spoke up again. “I heard your daughter got accepted in Yale and Princeton?”
“Yes.” I give a small smile. “Columbia too.” I say proudly.
“But she’s going to USC?”
Does it make me a bad father that my smile faltered a bit when he said that? “Y-yeah, she is. She got accepted into this famous film school. Apparently George Lucas is one of its graduates.” I ripped through that one in a single breath, trying to hide the strain in my voice. I might get stoned for this, but I’m not a fan of Star Wars anyway.
“I see. George Lucas.” He says somewhat stoically. I would bet every single bill in my wallet – all thirty dollars of it – that Melvin Porter has never seen a Star Wars movie in his entire life.
“What Ivy League universities did Bette get accepted in?”
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This story is so funny and touching at the same time. Loved Ken’s freedom at the beginning. I hope Tina makes the right decision, not just her future that depends on it. Please post soon.
WOW!!!! I sure missed this fic-MY fav fic at that & man U did not dissapoint. It was hot & funny all rolled into 1. I love Tina & Bette’s study prepartions-Great update…. Thanks…
Happy to see this post. Now Tina has a hard decision to make, but she should talk to Bette about whats going on in her mind. Thanks Great Chapter!!! PPS
what a great chapter!!!! WOW~ poor Tina has such a hard decision to make not just for herself but for Bette aswell. Thanks for posting PPS
i think bette has a great idear for a book about studying… dam just think about the better grades we all could of got during school… i do hope tina makes the right choice… and in his way melvin is trying to do the right thing… PPS
What a wicked nice treat. I’ve missed this story, What a great update. I just love Ken too.
Congratulations are in order. Thanks for the post, as usual it was AWESOME!
Wonderful chappy, we’re back to dramaville. Hope the decision making doesn’t take too much toll on the girls.
Congrats on passing, Alchemy! Hope everything works out just as you wish. I am beyond doing a happy dance seeing your post and loved the chapter. I cannot quit laughing thinking about Shane’s stink finger. I had tears rolling down my cheeks while letting out a nice belly laugh. So freakin’ funny. Good to see Ken and Melvin working together… seems Bette will be a yalie after all.
OMG I LMAO as always but the ending got to me…. how sad.. the choice Tina has to make without Bette’s knowledge. They are all so funny together i just can’t see them apart!! no separation (puppy eyes) :) PPS
You’re back! And with an awesome update as well. Tina’s got a hard decision to make… but I think she, and Bette, will come to the right one in the end. Ken’s advice was pretty sound. Loved the chapter, Alchemy, thanks for posting. (and congrats on passing!)
That was awesome, funny at Melvin and Ken, Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet. Hope Tina will make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!