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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Two (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on November 30, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=71804
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    “All of them.” A cocky grin makes an appearance on his face. It’s frightening that I sometimes see that same smile on Bette. Like father, like daughter I guess. “But she ignored all the others and chose Yale – she had her mind and heart set on becoming a Yalie, like me and her mom. Or at least she did.” He mumbles. I can hear the resentment and disappointment in his voice.

     

    “Tina, she uh.. seems really happy and excited about USC. So.. I’m backing her decision up a hundred percent.” I mumble weakly, attempting a smile – which probably resembled a grimace. It’s enough for me to know that she was accepted in those famous universities, I tell myself again and again. Good father, supportive father.. I chant inside my head, trying to fight the taunting voice jeering at me from the back of my mind.

     

    I guess it wasn’t such a far-fetched thing that Porter arches a skeptical eyebrow in my direction. I’m such an unconvincing liar, and I have a non-existent poker face.

     

    Fuck, that eyebrow of his just won’t come down. Fine. “Okay, maybe just ninety nine percent.” I backtrack.

     

    He gives me a knowing smile. Liar! I could practically hear his thoughts.

     

    A while later, he turns serious once more. “I’m worried about Bette,” He confessed as he took in a deep breath. The deep creases on his forehead became more pronounced, and all of a sudden, he looked older than his years. “I.. I don’t have a very strong heart. I know I’m not the indestructible man that I foolishly believed I was during my younger years. Walking around the estate is a struggle in itself, let alone flying all over the world to run my business.” He smiled a sad, bitter smile. I could tell that this was a sensitive matter for him. There was nothing worse for a workaholic than to be told that he or she needed to cut down on work – or stop working entirely. “Who knows what may happen in the next four years? I might be okay now, but if something happens again, I might not even be alive to see my daughter graduate college.” He paused and exhaled audibly. I stay silent, I don’t know how to respond to that. “Bette would.. have to take over the family business earlier than anticipated.” He continued.

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    1. This story is so funny and touching at the same time. Loved Ken’s freedom at the beginning. I hope Tina makes the right decision, not just her future that depends on it. Please post soon.

    2. WOW!!!! I sure missed this fic-MY fav fic at that & man U did not dissapoint. It was hot & funny all rolled into 1. I love Tina & Bette’s study prepartions-Great update…. Thanks…

    3. Happy to see this post. Now Tina has a hard decision to make, but she should talk to Bette about whats going on in her mind. Thanks Great Chapter!!! PPS

    5. i think bette has a great idear for a book about studying… dam just think about the better grades we all could of got during school… i do hope tina makes the right choice… and in his way melvin is trying to do the right thing… PPS

    9. Congrats on passing, Alchemy! Hope everything works out just as you wish. I am beyond doing a happy dance seeing your post and loved the chapter. I cannot quit laughing thinking about Shane’s stink finger. I had tears rolling down my cheeks while letting out a nice belly laugh. So freakin’ funny. Good to see Ken and Melvin working together… seems Bette will be a yalie after all.

    10. OMG I LMAO as always but the ending got to me…. how sad.. the choice Tina has to make without Bette’s knowledge. They are all so funny together i just can’t see them apart!! no separation (puppy eyes) :) PPS

    11. You’re back! And with an awesome update as well. Tina’s got a hard decision to make… but I think she, and Bette, will come to the right one in the end. Ken’s advice was pretty sound. Loved the chapter, Alchemy, thanks for posting. (and congrats on passing!)

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