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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
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    Match maid in heaven..

     

    Her confession was met with silence. Bette, with her mouth ajar and her eyes slammed shut, remained entrenched in her dreams. Tina didn’t mind, she wasn’t expecting an answer anyway – besides, deep down, she knew that what Bette told her at the diner still rang true. She saw the looks she’s been giving her, heard the truth behind the jabs she’d been dishing out. Despite her recent coldness, she missed her too.

     

    Without her noticing, the seconds flew by swiftly, and in a blink of an eye, ten minutes had come and gone. It was time. With a determined breath and a bittersweet smile at the brunette, Tina turned around, walked to the door, slipped on her shoes and glided over to the windows. One by one, she pulled open the thick curtains and bathed the room with warm rays from the sun. The girl on the bed groaned, moved to avoid the obtrusive light, but still did not wake.

     

    Tina went back to Bette, stood beside the bed like before and contemplated her next move. For her own safety, Sonja warned her against pulling the same stunts she did the previous mornings. No more hitting with pillows, she remembered the older woman saying before she left. Don’t wake her with pinches either, Sonja told her over the phone the other day. Please don’t use firecrackers inside her room again, the maid begged her last night through email. It was more for her own well-being than Bette’s, you’ll never know how violent she’d react when pushed to the limit. Tina looked at the brunette and chewed on her lower lip. Fine. Out of respect to the kindly chambermaid, she would heed her warnings this morning.

     

    “Babe-” She began. Whoopsie! Blushing, Tina cleared her throat and started again. “Por-” She trailed off. Fuck. It was already her fifth day, but she didn’t think she’d ever get used to calling Bette anything else other than her surname or her usual term of endearment. In any case, it just felt awkward calling her girlfriend “Miss” – for one, the title sounded lady-like and respectable; and you know F4′s leader, most of the time she was anything but those things. And two, it just felt weird. But what choice did she have? Her new job required such dignities to be paid to her master. Tina wet her lips and took a deep breath. “Miss Bette..” She called out softly, placing a hand on the brunette’s arm, giving it a brief shake. Her master didn’t stir. “Miss Bette?” The maid tried again, calling out louder and shaking harder. Still the same; the heiress remained dead to the world. “Miss Bette?” She tried again. And again. To no avail.

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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