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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
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    Match maid in heaven..

     

    One.. two.. three.. nine.. ten.. twelve.. fifteen..

     

    She crept closer to the bed and stopped beside the figure lying on top of it – blissfully lost in the land of slumber. The sleeping woman laid sprawled on her back, curly hair plastered all over her face and limbs spread out in funny directions – with one arm draped over her eyes and the other one flung haphazardly against the pillow beside her. Her legs were positioned so far apart, she might as well have been doing a split in bed. When she had company, she was a cuddly spooner; but without a warm body pressed against her, Bette Porter was a human tornado – twisting, turning, rotating in bed. The rumpled sheets were only covering half of her torso; giving the dilated pupils of the blonde observer a nice peek of the scrumptious cleavage underneath a pajama button that had come undone. For someone who came in here with the sole purpose of waking up the slumbering owner of the room, her actions surely did not mirror her intentions. She stood there, silent and still, refusing to budge an inch. She didn’t need to wake her master just yet. As James had said, she was early – ten minutes ahead of schedule, in fact. When asked about it by the other maids that she passed along the way, she shrugged and said that she just wanted to be punctual – to have another chance to make a good impression on her boss.

     

    She lied.

     

    She was early because she wanted to be here, beside Bette – and watch her peaceful face before she woke up and the stresses and troubles of the day robbed her of the sight. She missed watching Bette sleep. And in all honesty, she missed sleeping beside her more. But until they fix all the issues and animosity between them, she’d have to settle for this – enjoying stolen glimpses of her love while she lay oblivious to her longing looks. No walls, no judgments, no pretensions, no arguments. Just plain admiration and utter adoration.

     

    “I miss you..” She whispered softly, the words rolling off her tongue with ease. She couldn’t hold it in anymore, she just needed to let that out. Tina sighed sadly and stared at Bette’s parted lips, mesmerized by the sight. She wanted nothing more than to reach a finger out and trace its outline with it – or better yet, let her aching tongue do the tracing for her. But she stopped herself; got a firm grip on her innermost desires and satisfied herself with just looking at the beauty in front of her. The beautiful creature that, in all aspects, still belonged to her. If only they could start putting their shit together. “I miss you so much..”

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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