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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT28
Tina had never fought against it, but she knew how hard it was for Bette to have always strived for the perfection that was expected of her, only to have the facts of her significant and major achievements never being good enough thrown at her throughout her life, this was one thing that Tina never had and never would do, she had grown up to believe that any achievement, however small or insignificant, should be praised, the very fact of trying in the first place was enough, to know someone had ‘done their best’, it was all anyone could ever ask for, its all Tina hoped for.
She knew that Bette always tried her best, always in her work, always in helping others and for Tina, she always tried her absolute utmost to please Tina, in everyway possibly known to man, she wasn’t a good cook, she was a renowned bad cook, but she tried her best and for Tina that was what made the food taste unique…
And Bette without shadow of a doubt always tried her best in paying attention to Tina, making her feel special, the room full of rose petals was the result of Bette’s concentrated thoughts on pleasing Tina, and she had totally surpassed herself, yet again. Tina’s constant praise of any of Bette’s achievements, however small, always brought a smile to Bette’s face, the sheer fact of the spoken word from her love made it all worth the effort, unfortunately, Tina knew that ultimately Bette would never be completely happy with any of her own achievements unless her overbearing parent gave his nod of approval.
Bette’s focused attention continued with such an abundance as she had made love to her at the restaurant with such gentle passion, albeit with the enticement of the stockings and suspenders, but nonetheless, it had been the most erotic and sensual meal they had ever eaten in a restaurant, Tina smiled to herself as her thoughts of the restaurant floated in her mind, hell… it was the most erotic and sensual time they had spent in a restaurant, ever. They’d fooled around with hands under the table many a time, they’d snuck off to the bathrooms to finish off what the fumblings had started, but they had never been in such a place where they could have complete privacy, where Tina could taunt and tease as she had done last night, only to have the ante upped by Bette and to have her hands pressed firmly against the glass wall, to have Bette behind her, touching her and whispering to her, making her body weak with desire, the gentle fingertip touches along her stockings, the gentle pressure of her fingers in the place only she knew, the place where no woman had been before, the place where only Bette knew when and where to touch or taste to bring Tina to edge of complete oblivion. Last night during the time at the restaurant, she had been brought to another universe, Bette’s words of love and oysters bringing her to sensory overload.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
I used to think that your words left me speechless….they dont….they just havnt been thought of yet!…..I dont know how it could be possible to feel a warmer glow than to read this….what a truly amazing,talented, natural writter you are….x
And i get to say it first….doing my happy dance!…lol…
Welcome back, Jobadge. Sorry you were ill, but you seem to have recovered. What a nice environment in which to wake up. I should be so lucky.
Beautiful, abosultley beautiful! You have a way with words. Romantic, erotic,sensual,sexy,sweet…all of these feelings are conveyed at once. It makes you feel so good inside! I am so glad you are back and feeling better I hope. Anxioulsy awaiting another chapter! Once again, great job! I say it again you make me like tina again… and then i read lastkid’s story and I can’t stand her!lol
I Can’t believe you left them tied up all this time!!!
Just totally wonderful. I am so sorry to hear you’ve been ill. It certainly hasn’t dimmed your talent any. Your writing is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing it with us. Now you make sure you get lots of rest and write us another wonderful chapter!
Great to have you back! I really love this story and hope we’ll see more soon!
WAY TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rating disabled ?? i’d give you 20 out of 10 for that one Jo. Brilliant to have you back and a lovely chapter to return with . i hav esaid it before but you are my fav writer on the board as well as being one of the best people i have had the pleasure of knowing — one page ??? TOO SHORT snigger
PERFECT!
WOW! Thats all I can say! WOW! oh and what a beautiful chapter to this lovely story of B and T! Thanks.
That was really fantastic! I love your stories you write so beautifully and I can’t wait for the next part!
Jobadge I’ve been thinking about you. So glad to get this chapter – and what a perfect one pager it was! Paitiently waiting til next time!
Ahhhh..what can i say, perfection. Tina’s completely in love with that woman, she finally realized how wonderful bette truly is. I lOve this story. No fights,no work, no interruptions, just bette ant Tina. GOOd JOB.
You have been sorely missed. You have not missed a beat with this chapter. Sometimes one’s mind can bring back all that lovely feeling. To know that you are loved so much by another can send one back into orbit. Thanks for the update and again welcome back.
Jobadge this was an absolutely beautiful chapter and reading Tina’s musings while holding Bette in her arms and seeing how very much she loves her. It was just quietly sensuous and quite wonderful, really. Thanks for this chapter and this story. Love it.
wonderful, welcome back! this was so touching! of course they have space for one more!
beautiful…i hope their love will always be this way: romantic, intense, amazing
you are something else….damn that was beautifule! Thank you so much…
That was – simply wonderful! Glad you are better.
A lovely, romantic chapter. It also served as a reminder to other events in your last posts, and how everything was connected. Touching and well written! Thanks for writing.
Jo, that was phenomenal. This is what we all desire–to have a love like that. Thank you!
Hey Jo I can see you’ve made a compromise – Tinas wonderful thoughts now and then some NC-17, ok with me :o)) I loved the thoughts about sweet little Emily, great idea LMAO!!! I’m half way through the other story, I’ll let you know what I think tomorrow. Have a great Sunday mate
Wonderful, loved every word of it. Thansk for posting soon.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Beautiful writing, jo. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow this is amazing!