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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT28
Their return to the hotel, the slow strip tease, the undressing of her lover, the slow unwrapping of the most special gift in her life, the woman who brought so much into Tina’s life that she couldn’t ever find an appropriate word to even try and quantify how full and complete her life with Bette was, no word to describe how her chest swelled with love and pride at being loved by Bette, no word to epitomize her intense love for the woman she held in her arms. No word to describe how empty her life would be without this woman, the pain that her life would endure if there ever came a time when the united soul became torn in two. Tina’s eyes welled at the merest fleeting thought of how she would feel not being part of this love, she pushed the thought away as soon as the picture popped into her mind, it wasn’t even worth wasting time on the thoughts, because she knew, without a shadow of a doubt, it would never happen, their destiny was to be together until their dying day, no thoughts of her life being any different to this were going to cross her mind.
The image of the stark white underwear covering the intimate parts of her lover sprang into Tina’s mind, holding onto the bed post with all her might, slowly turning to then lower the zip of Tina’s dress. Tina remembered the deep pools of widening eyes as Bette made her first glance at the black underwear that Tina wore, the mesmerizing look as she saw the stockings, previously only found by touch, now the full visual was taking effect on Bette, and boy did she ever get worshipped, with Bette’s eyes, with her words, with her mouth and hands, with champagne and with a strawberry.
Tina thought about Bette’s words, whispered into her ear, it made her body quiver just thinking about it now, in the early morning hours after the intense night, the words still had the same effect, ‘I want you to wrap those stockinged legs around my neck!’, her body gave a slight shudder as the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end, her fingers stalled on the smooth thigh, pressing into the flesh slightly as her body once again reacted to thoughts of her lover, and her skilled and expertise in pleasuring Tina, which knew no boundaries.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
I used to think that your words left me speechless….they dont….they just havnt been thought of yet!…..I dont know how it could be possible to feel a warmer glow than to read this….what a truly amazing,talented, natural writter you are….x
And i get to say it first….doing my happy dance!…lol…
Welcome back, Jobadge. Sorry you were ill, but you seem to have recovered. What a nice environment in which to wake up. I should be so lucky.
Beautiful, abosultley beautiful! You have a way with words. Romantic, erotic,sensual,sexy,sweet…all of these feelings are conveyed at once. It makes you feel so good inside! I am so glad you are back and feeling better I hope. Anxioulsy awaiting another chapter! Once again, great job! I say it again you make me like tina again… and then i read lastkid’s story and I can’t stand her!lol
I Can’t believe you left them tied up all this time!!!
Just totally wonderful. I am so sorry to hear you’ve been ill. It certainly hasn’t dimmed your talent any. Your writing is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing it with us. Now you make sure you get lots of rest and write us another wonderful chapter!
Great to have you back! I really love this story and hope we’ll see more soon!
WAY TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rating disabled ?? i’d give you 20 out of 10 for that one Jo. Brilliant to have you back and a lovely chapter to return with . i hav esaid it before but you are my fav writer on the board as well as being one of the best people i have had the pleasure of knowing — one page ??? TOO SHORT snigger
PERFECT!
WOW! Thats all I can say! WOW! oh and what a beautiful chapter to this lovely story of B and T! Thanks.
That was really fantastic! I love your stories you write so beautifully and I can’t wait for the next part!
Jobadge I’ve been thinking about you. So glad to get this chapter – and what a perfect one pager it was! Paitiently waiting til next time!
Ahhhh..what can i say, perfection. Tina’s completely in love with that woman, she finally realized how wonderful bette truly is. I lOve this story. No fights,no work, no interruptions, just bette ant Tina. GOOd JOB.
You have been sorely missed. You have not missed a beat with this chapter. Sometimes one’s mind can bring back all that lovely feeling. To know that you are loved so much by another can send one back into orbit. Thanks for the update and again welcome back.
Jobadge this was an absolutely beautiful chapter and reading Tina’s musings while holding Bette in her arms and seeing how very much she loves her. It was just quietly sensuous and quite wonderful, really. Thanks for this chapter and this story. Love it.
wonderful, welcome back! this was so touching! of course they have space for one more!
beautiful…i hope their love will always be this way: romantic, intense, amazing
you are something else….damn that was beautifule! Thank you so much…
That was – simply wonderful! Glad you are better.
A lovely, romantic chapter. It also served as a reminder to other events in your last posts, and how everything was connected. Touching and well written! Thanks for writing.
Jo, that was phenomenal. This is what we all desire–to have a love like that. Thank you!
Hey Jo I can see you’ve made a compromise – Tinas wonderful thoughts now and then some NC-17, ok with me :o)) I loved the thoughts about sweet little Emily, great idea LMAO!!! I’m half way through the other story, I’ll let you know what I think tomorrow. Have a great Sunday mate
Wonderful, loved every word of it. Thansk for posting soon.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Beautiful writing, jo. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow this is amazing!