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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT28
Even after seven years together she still found it hard to believe at times how her body reacted, how Bette made her body react, how they could look at each other and instant feelings could surge throughout her, shaking her to the very core. How they could be in a room full of people and one intense look from Bette from the far side would make the hairs at the base of her neck stand on end, to travel throughout her and settle in one specific place, the specific place that Bette would give her undivided attention to when the crowd had dispersed.
And why after seven years did she still have orgasms that felt like the top of her head was going to blow off, that made her dizzy, weak, and in such a euphoric state that she couldn’t even utter her own name, wasn’t it meant to be the best sex in the beginning of a relationship? Well, not in this case, it just kept getting better and better.
Tina brought her face closer, their bodies were in a full length embrace but her thoughts were making her want to be closer still, she moved her face forward, her nose nuzzling the darks curls, she allowed her lips to gently rest on the juncture between neck and shoulder, the place where her lips fit perfectly, the place where she always began her morning ritual of kisses on her partner, the place where a kiss was never enough.
Her hand moved from the triangle of curls to rest on the dip at Bette’s waist, Tina loved nothing more than lying behind Bette, kissing her neck and shoulder and running her hand from the dip, over her hip and down the smooth thigh and back, over and over, the merest touches giving her the familiar feeling of wanting more, her body unconsciously moved itself against Bette, her groin moving against the warm cheeks nestling close to her body, she opened her eyes and looked above, seeing a constricted view of her own face, partially covered by the dark mane, she watched the mesmerizing scene of her own body slowly gyrating beneath the cream sheet, the slow movements of her hand apparent by the shadows beneath the linen. The effect of watching was having an undeniably arousing feeling within Tina’s mind and body.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
I used to think that your words left me speechless….they dont….they just havnt been thought of yet!…..I dont know how it could be possible to feel a warmer glow than to read this….what a truly amazing,talented, natural writter you are….x
And i get to say it first….doing my happy dance!…lol…
Welcome back, Jobadge. Sorry you were ill, but you seem to have recovered. What a nice environment in which to wake up. I should be so lucky.
Beautiful, abosultley beautiful! You have a way with words. Romantic, erotic,sensual,sexy,sweet…all of these feelings are conveyed at once. It makes you feel so good inside! I am so glad you are back and feeling better I hope. Anxioulsy awaiting another chapter! Once again, great job! I say it again you make me like tina again… and then i read lastkid’s story and I can’t stand her!lol
I Can’t believe you left them tied up all this time!!!
Just totally wonderful. I am so sorry to hear you’ve been ill. It certainly hasn’t dimmed your talent any. Your writing is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing it with us. Now you make sure you get lots of rest and write us another wonderful chapter!
Great to have you back! I really love this story and hope we’ll see more soon!
WAY TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rating disabled ?? i’d give you 20 out of 10 for that one Jo. Brilliant to have you back and a lovely chapter to return with . i hav esaid it before but you are my fav writer on the board as well as being one of the best people i have had the pleasure of knowing — one page ??? TOO SHORT snigger
PERFECT!
WOW! Thats all I can say! WOW! oh and what a beautiful chapter to this lovely story of B and T! Thanks.
That was really fantastic! I love your stories you write so beautifully and I can’t wait for the next part!
Jobadge I’ve been thinking about you. So glad to get this chapter – and what a perfect one pager it was! Paitiently waiting til next time!
Ahhhh..what can i say, perfection. Tina’s completely in love with that woman, she finally realized how wonderful bette truly is. I lOve this story. No fights,no work, no interruptions, just bette ant Tina. GOOd JOB.
You have been sorely missed. You have not missed a beat with this chapter. Sometimes one’s mind can bring back all that lovely feeling. To know that you are loved so much by another can send one back into orbit. Thanks for the update and again welcome back.
Jobadge this was an absolutely beautiful chapter and reading Tina’s musings while holding Bette in her arms and seeing how very much she loves her. It was just quietly sensuous and quite wonderful, really. Thanks for this chapter and this story. Love it.
wonderful, welcome back! this was so touching! of course they have space for one more!
beautiful…i hope their love will always be this way: romantic, intense, amazing
you are something else….damn that was beautifule! Thank you so much…
That was – simply wonderful! Glad you are better.
A lovely, romantic chapter. It also served as a reminder to other events in your last posts, and how everything was connected. Touching and well written! Thanks for writing.
Jo, that was phenomenal. This is what we all desire–to have a love like that. Thank you!
Hey Jo I can see you’ve made a compromise – Tinas wonderful thoughts now and then some NC-17, ok with me :o)) I loved the thoughts about sweet little Emily, great idea LMAO!!! I’m half way through the other story, I’ll let you know what I think tomorrow. Have a great Sunday mate
Wonderful, loved every word of it. Thansk for posting soon.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Beautiful writing, jo. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow this is amazing!