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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT28
She slid her eyes closed once again, trying to free her mind of the arousing thoughts, she wanted Bette to rest some more, there was plenty of time to arouse her body and mind, she wanted to wallow in the bed of love, in the thoughts of her and Bette and their amazing life together.
Although her body and hands continued their subtle dance against Bette’s body, her mind suddenly turned to the previous afternoon, the time when they had started Alice’s relationship test, the time when Bette walked away for fifteen minutes and came back with a seemly reborn attitude, thanks to a conversation with an adorable five year old little girl called Emily, she thought she would try and find out from Bette what their conversation had been about, but her first instinct was that it was about the little girl and her overbearing father, the very thing that had sparked Bette walking away in the first place. The very fact that Tina had told Bette she didn’t like the way she was treated when her father was around.
Tina’s mind began to play the game of whether or not they should continue the relationship test, on the one hand she felt it was important to finish it, to see it through, bring it to its natural conclusion. But on the other hand, she didn’t want them to have the full outspoken discussion on the reasoning for the statements, the most important thing to Tina had been that they had been honest with one another and from the way they had been communicating with each other, the very fact of honesty in their statements held more meaning and understanding to her than to hash out the whys and wherefores of each one, to dissect and analyse may do more harm than good in their current euphoric state of oblivious love.
Her mind was telling her that they had learnt so much just from the talking they had done at the beach, she didn’t want for Bette to have to go through the turmoil of thinking about her motherless childhood, the strict upbringing by a man who she had strived all her life to have acceptance of, the man who held the one part of Bette that Tina never would.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
I used to think that your words left me speechless….they dont….they just havnt been thought of yet!…..I dont know how it could be possible to feel a warmer glow than to read this….what a truly amazing,talented, natural writter you are….x
And i get to say it first….doing my happy dance!…lol…
Welcome back, Jobadge. Sorry you were ill, but you seem to have recovered. What a nice environment in which to wake up. I should be so lucky.
Beautiful, abosultley beautiful! You have a way with words. Romantic, erotic,sensual,sexy,sweet…all of these feelings are conveyed at once. It makes you feel so good inside! I am so glad you are back and feeling better I hope. Anxioulsy awaiting another chapter! Once again, great job! I say it again you make me like tina again… and then i read lastkid’s story and I can’t stand her!lol
I Can’t believe you left them tied up all this time!!!
Just totally wonderful. I am so sorry to hear you’ve been ill. It certainly hasn’t dimmed your talent any. Your writing is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing it with us. Now you make sure you get lots of rest and write us another wonderful chapter!
Great to have you back! I really love this story and hope we’ll see more soon!
WAY TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rating disabled ?? i’d give you 20 out of 10 for that one Jo. Brilliant to have you back and a lovely chapter to return with . i hav esaid it before but you are my fav writer on the board as well as being one of the best people i have had the pleasure of knowing — one page ??? TOO SHORT snigger
PERFECT!
WOW! Thats all I can say! WOW! oh and what a beautiful chapter to this lovely story of B and T! Thanks.
That was really fantastic! I love your stories you write so beautifully and I can’t wait for the next part!
Jobadge I’ve been thinking about you. So glad to get this chapter – and what a perfect one pager it was! Paitiently waiting til next time!
Ahhhh..what can i say, perfection. Tina’s completely in love with that woman, she finally realized how wonderful bette truly is. I lOve this story. No fights,no work, no interruptions, just bette ant Tina. GOOd JOB.
You have been sorely missed. You have not missed a beat with this chapter. Sometimes one’s mind can bring back all that lovely feeling. To know that you are loved so much by another can send one back into orbit. Thanks for the update and again welcome back.
Jobadge this was an absolutely beautiful chapter and reading Tina’s musings while holding Bette in her arms and seeing how very much she loves her. It was just quietly sensuous and quite wonderful, really. Thanks for this chapter and this story. Love it.
wonderful, welcome back! this was so touching! of course they have space for one more!
beautiful…i hope their love will always be this way: romantic, intense, amazing
you are something else….damn that was beautifule! Thank you so much…
That was – simply wonderful! Glad you are better.
A lovely, romantic chapter. It also served as a reminder to other events in your last posts, and how everything was connected. Touching and well written! Thanks for writing.
Jo, that was phenomenal. This is what we all desire–to have a love like that. Thank you!
Hey Jo I can see you’ve made a compromise – Tinas wonderful thoughts now and then some NC-17, ok with me :o)) I loved the thoughts about sweet little Emily, great idea LMAO!!! I’m half way through the other story, I’ll let you know what I think tomorrow. Have a great Sunday mate
Wonderful, loved every word of it. Thansk for posting soon.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Beautiful writing, jo. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow this is amazing!