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TIME WILL TELL IF WE HAVE MADE A GOOD DECISION (CHAPTER 2)
“Wake up, woman!” Christian says , annoyed by what Carmen said. “That woman doesn’t want to you. She deceived you, you forgave her; she asked to marry you – God knows why!– you had your doubts, but even so you accepted. Why? Because you loved her and you wanted to see her happy. And what did the adorable Shane do? Left you in front all your family and friends… OH! And one more a thing!A few hours later you find her, but the damned bitch doesn´t say a word! And you think she loves you? she´s probably off having a good time with some idiot, while you´re here feeling like shit.”
“Yeahh.. I am an idiot”, says Carmen, ashamed. “You don´t have to get so angry, Christian. I know that Shane´s a disaster as a girlfriend and she doesn’t act normal. Shane never could be normal- she is different. That´s why I fell in love with her. She´s the sexiest woman on this whole damn planet! You´d understand if you knew her.” Carmen cannot stop talking about Shane. “I don´t know a single person who hasn´t wanted to spend one night or just some time with her “.
Suddenly , Carmen stops speaking. Images of Shane with other women come to her mind; her touching them, kissing them, smiling at them the same way that she used to with Carmen. She thinks ‘Maybe Christian is telling the truth´.
“Finally, you´ve stopped talking!” Christian says with a smile. “She may be is the hottest woman on the planet, but she’s still being a complete idiot. You know what you need to do? Go out, get drunk and hook up with the first woman you meet on the street. That works very well for me,” he says, nodding.
“Works?”,Carmen says ,shaking her head. “I don’t think so. Look at you! You Don’t trust anyone. When was the last time you said ‘I love you’ and you didn’t regret it two seconds later? Thanks for your advice, but I’m not going to try it.”
“You don’t need to follow it to the letter. You just have to go out, meet new people. In one of them, you’ll find the true love of your life,” Christian says looking directly into Carmen’s eyes. “You hear me? The true love of your life!”
‘How can Cristian dare to say something so stupid,‘ thought Carmen in silence. ‘Shane is the one and only true love of my life. Is it possible any other woman can make me feel the way she does? No, I don’t think that woman exists!’
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what will carmen do about the letter and will she wait please post soon so I can find out what happens between them great post
Hope Sasha doesn’t make that move before Carmen gets that letter. Loved Shane’s letter. Great post, update soon.
I love your story. It explains alot about how things happen in logical ways. Well, if in your story, Shane need more times to make a better herself. I, a little different. Would you make the post as soon as you can? ’cause I love it, can’t help ;)