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TIME WILL TELL IF WE HAVE MADE A GOOD DECISION (CHAPTER 2)
Boston ,friday 1:30 in midnight.
Julia comes back from her best friend´s birthday party. Shane is asleep at the table.Crumpled Pieces of paper are scattered on the floor around the table.Julia walks silently, puts down her purse on the chair, and aproaches Shane slowly.
“Shane…sweetheart” says Julia, touching her daughter´s shoulder.
Shane wakes up.She open her eyes slowly and smiles :”I guess I fell asleep”.
Julia takes a seat beside her. “¿What are all those papers?”.
Shane says,”I wrote a letter for Carmen, and as you can see, it wasn´t a easy job”.
Shane´s eyes are a little swollen as if she´s been crying ,Julia realizes .”I see…it cost you a lot of tears”,she says with a slight smile. “Yeah, it´s hard to find the right words,those ones that describe exactly how you feel.Poets have it tough”.Julia stops to listenning to the music playing.”Oh,I love that song!It´s so sad that you can feel the singer´s suffering.”
Shane sights.”Yeah, you can.Crazy,isn´t it? Even though it makes me feel like a shit,I can´t stop to listenning to it.”
“Is just that you are in the grieving stage….We´ve all been there.You don´t eat, you can´t sleep,you spend all day thinking about her, you listen to songs that make you want to slit yours wrist.You just feel completely lost in life…you feel like the worst piece of shit in the world,” Julia says.
“I used to think the people that were in this same situation -`grieving stage´-were just drama queens.I Always thought`What idiots!With so many womans in the world,why waste time on just one?´And look at me now.”Shane shakes her head .”Amazing..”.Shane stands up and says, “I´m going to make some coffee.Want some?.”
“Yes, please”,Julia says
Meanwhile, back in New York.
The party is a complete success.People can´t stop moving to the music.It´s time for Carmen to take a break, and she goes directly to the bar for a beer.She watches the people dancing,laughing, having fun;she wishes she could,too.Christian comes out of the crowd with a beautiful blonde. Carmen doesn´t see him because her back is turned as she order another beer. Sasha and Christian talk as they walk towards Carmen.
Annoyed, Sasha says,”Why´d you interrumpt me?”
Christian says, “I want to introduce you to Carmen”.
“And for that you had to interrumpt my conversation with that beautiful Brazilian model?You´re a complete idiot!”.
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what will carmen do about the letter and will she wait please post soon so I can find out what happens between them great post
Hope Sasha doesn’t make that move before Carmen gets that letter. Loved Shane’s letter. Great post, update soon.
I love your story. It explains alot about how things happen in logical ways. Well, if in your story, Shane need more times to make a better herself. I, a little different. Would you make the post as soon as you can? ’cause I love it, can’t help ;)