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Reunions Reunite: The way we were, chapter 2
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In slow motion I saw her fingers approach, her eyes so strangely familiair, making my heart pound in a rhythm I had never felt before. She winced when the tip of her indexfinger gently grazed the crust, and her eyes, bare without the protection of the glasses that laid forgotten in the sand… I had heard someone say once dark eyes were less accessible then light ones, like as in dark pools, you wouldn’t be able to see the content, but her eyes, no matter how dark, showed me more then I had ever seen… They showed now an empathy that was nothing near the pity I had feared earlier, and took my breath away. I felt understood and cared for with that one single gaze, and as she covered the cut with the palm of her hand, I felt a shiver rush through my body, and the tears that I had thought to be subsided shot up to my throat.
She didn’t speak, just drew me nearer, in such a clumsy motion that I instantly knew she had never done that before. She gently placed my unhurt cheek on her shoulder, and I felt all her muscles tense up, in anticipation, it seemed, of her act, as if she had commited a crime and now awaited her punishment.
Maybe it was because she was relatively a stranger, that made it easier for me to open up…
Maybe she had just been at the right place, at the right time…
Maybe it was the fact that she allready had seen me broken down, and hadn’t judged…
But most likely it were those eyes, those gentle chocolatebrown eyes that had glanced into my soul, making me feel that sudden enstranging realization that home had nothing to do with a place, but everything with a person.
She had stayed with me that day, holding me, stroking my hair to prevent if from blowing into my eyes. She didn’t ask, she didn’t speak, we just sat there watching the waves in what seemed to be an agreed silence.
I had only known the uncomfortable silence of ignoring, the scary silence after rage and the bittersweet silence of loneliness untill that moment. But this one was comforting and caring, and I didn’t at all feel forced to break it.
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OK, a sorta silent reader creeping out to say well done mate!! Loved it and can’t wait for more. I thought you had forgotten about this story. PPS
WOW, I am speechless! Please continue!
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
It took me forever to get through the chapter. 1.) It was tough. Nothing light and fluffy about it. A great chapter as always, but still tough and 2.) I got held up chatting with someone. LMAO Two shitty men in Tina’s life. =( PPS!
Very intense. Quite the connection between B&T as always. Waiting for the next post.
Wow…the chapter certainly was a hard one to read due to it’s nature. However, it was perfectly written and well done!! Again…got me hooked! Have a good one!
this was heavy…but a wonderful connection between B&T…i hope they can heal each other from whatever happened in those 13 years
Excellent writing as usual. Very descriptive and VERY moving. It can take alot out of a writer when delving into areas of life that are so dark and deep. Thank you for sharing your talent and for putting as much time in as you do to prepare a fabulous piece of work. BRAVO! Oh yeah, and MORE!!!! :-)))
whoa!!!!!!!!!!! great work
The hurt that Tina felt due to her father must have been unbearable. To watch her mother go through what she did and know that there was really nothing that she could do to help her mother must have been very painful. Then to have the one person that could take that pain away even if it was for a few seconds to be there to catch you helps to make one continue to move forward in the walk of life. Both are sorry about something and I wonder if they can put that aside and rebuild their friendship. Of course their relationship is more than just friendship.
Damn this is so good. Sad for Tina, is hurt to see that happen to Tina, is good that Bette was there to comforting her.Don’t know what happen that they are not see or be with each other but hope now its time for B&T have a start and a happy life together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
wow… just wow… ;)
Oh, I love this…pls don’t stop there!!!
You did such an amazing job of balancing the really hard to read with the absolutely breathtakingly wonderful bits. The connection between the two of them is amazing, and I LOVE how you’re setting this up. Fantastic, as always!
WOW!!!! Thanks PPS
hello my friend! (blushing!) like i told you before it was a wondeful week! thanks so much for everything! the worst part was said goodbye i never think that it was so hard! this chapter was great, with a lot of emotions, Tina have been living through a lot of hards things but it so good that Bette was with her comforting her, the connection between them it’s so magical don’t you think? now i am courious why Bette is sorry? wonderful chapter i hope that you feel better for the next one. i enjoy so much this and i am missing you so much
Excellent chapter per usual hun!! I guess thats what i love about your writing, no matter what the content, sad or happy the emotion is so very strong.. Can’t wait for more (per usual) :)
what? what? Huh? What are they sorry for? Have I missed out some chapters? haha… Oh JLBT… this is so intense. STOP DOMESTIC VIOLENCE!! I wish to be there for Tina too when that horrible thing happened. So that Tina wouldn’t be living in guilt and blame herself over her father’s faults. Anyway, I love this chapter and will forever amazed by your writing :D
Everytime I think you could not blow me away even more, you do to a degree that I could have never imagined… OMG J, that was… well, there you go, I can’t even find the words… I don’t know how you manage, but this is just … so… intense! The drama that draw them together, making the connection that more precious and peculiar… Wow! I wish I could say more, but seriously I don’t think I would do justice to my real feelings after reading this… Thanks PIC!