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Reunions Reunite: The way we were, chapter 2
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As I had crouched to help her, it had been something I had done instinctivily, but her eyes, without the protection of her glasses, had drew me in instantly… Those warm, darkbrown, deerlike eyes, and the sudden strong desire to see them again.
I looked away, confused by my own thoughts and feelings, but as I felt her slowly approach a warm feeling washed over me. She slid into the sand next to me, and I felt her movements rather then I saw them from the corner of my eye as I pretended to stare into the shattering waves.
She had taken a handkerchief out of her jeanspocket, an oldfashioned handkerchief, not a disposable tissue… I remember how tense my muscles felt as I awaited the first sniding comment on my cheek or tears -something that later made me realise what a sorry excuse for friends the people around me were- but… Nothing came.
She took of her glasses and I resisted the strong urge to glance to the side, knowing somehow that if my eyes would meet hers, something inevitable would happen. But I did observe her, from my periferal view… She was staring at the sea, her position almost mirroring mine, her arms around her pulled up legs, cleaning those thick glasses with the handkerchief before she, in what seemed to be an absentminded gesture, handed the small piece of fabric to me.
I bit my upperlip as my muscles contracted and relaxed only a split second after eachother, overwhelmed by the intensity of the feelings her small gesture had evoked.
She didn’t judge, she didn’t even as much as glance, she just sat there, next to me, and somehow I had never felt more comforted… I could feel her warmth, allthough she wasn’t touching me, and as I took the offered item out of her casually outstretched hand, our fingers brushed against eachother.
Softness, the feeling of utter softness made its way to my numbed heart, but before I realized what was happening she had pulled back as if she had been burned…
I grasped the little white object, clinging onto it to prevent me from bursting out in uncontrolable tears. I glanced at her, but she still stared at the waves, seemingly lost in thoughts.
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OK, a sorta silent reader creeping out to say well done mate!! Loved it and can’t wait for more. I thought you had forgotten about this story. PPS
WOW, I am speechless! Please continue!
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
It took me forever to get through the chapter. 1.) It was tough. Nothing light and fluffy about it. A great chapter as always, but still tough and 2.) I got held up chatting with someone. LMAO Two shitty men in Tina’s life. =( PPS!
Very intense. Quite the connection between B&T as always. Waiting for the next post.
Wow…the chapter certainly was a hard one to read due to it’s nature. However, it was perfectly written and well done!! Again…got me hooked! Have a good one!
this was heavy…but a wonderful connection between B&T…i hope they can heal each other from whatever happened in those 13 years
Excellent writing as usual. Very descriptive and VERY moving. It can take alot out of a writer when delving into areas of life that are so dark and deep. Thank you for sharing your talent and for putting as much time in as you do to prepare a fabulous piece of work. BRAVO! Oh yeah, and MORE!!!! :-)))
whoa!!!!!!!!!!! great work
The hurt that Tina felt due to her father must have been unbearable. To watch her mother go through what she did and know that there was really nothing that she could do to help her mother must have been very painful. Then to have the one person that could take that pain away even if it was for a few seconds to be there to catch you helps to make one continue to move forward in the walk of life. Both are sorry about something and I wonder if they can put that aside and rebuild their friendship. Of course their relationship is more than just friendship.
Damn this is so good. Sad for Tina, is hurt to see that happen to Tina, is good that Bette was there to comforting her.Don’t know what happen that they are not see or be with each other but hope now its time for B&T have a start and a happy life together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
wow… just wow… ;)
Oh, I love this…pls don’t stop there!!!
You did such an amazing job of balancing the really hard to read with the absolutely breathtakingly wonderful bits. The connection between the two of them is amazing, and I LOVE how you’re setting this up. Fantastic, as always!
WOW!!!! Thanks PPS
hello my friend! (blushing!) like i told you before it was a wondeful week! thanks so much for everything! the worst part was said goodbye i never think that it was so hard! this chapter was great, with a lot of emotions, Tina have been living through a lot of hards things but it so good that Bette was with her comforting her, the connection between them it’s so magical don’t you think? now i am courious why Bette is sorry? wonderful chapter i hope that you feel better for the next one. i enjoy so much this and i am missing you so much
Excellent chapter per usual hun!! I guess thats what i love about your writing, no matter what the content, sad or happy the emotion is so very strong.. Can’t wait for more (per usual) :)
what? what? Huh? What are they sorry for? Have I missed out some chapters? haha… Oh JLBT… this is so intense. STOP DOMESTIC VIOLENCE!! I wish to be there for Tina too when that horrible thing happened. So that Tina wouldn’t be living in guilt and blame herself over her father’s faults. Anyway, I love this chapter and will forever amazed by your writing :D
Everytime I think you could not blow me away even more, you do to a degree that I could have never imagined… OMG J, that was… well, there you go, I can’t even find the words… I don’t know how you manage, but this is just … so… intense! The drama that draw them together, making the connection that more precious and peculiar… Wow! I wish I could say more, but seriously I don’t think I would do justice to my real feelings after reading this… Thanks PIC!