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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 81
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 81
Previously.
As Bette continued the drive like a maniac to Susan LaFay’s house. I’m going to ***** kill
Bette and Shane ran up the front steps of Susan’s house. The door was slightly open. Bette slammed into it nearly knocking it off its hinges. She was in the living roomand stopped dead in her tracks.
Tina was sitting on the couch and
“You, ***** *****! God DAMN you, Helena Peabody!” Then she looked to
Shane slowly backed away from Bette and out of the house. She saw a chance and she was going to take it.
“Tina, my Love, why don’t you tell Bette what you need to tell her.”
Tina tried but couldn’t stop the tears from falling.
“Go on, now. Tell your cheating ***** wife what you need to say.”
“Bette, I need to stay with
“What are you talking about? Tina, what are you sayingthis is crazy”
“Didn’t you hear what she said, Bette? Hearing going bad in your old age, um? She wants to be with me, never really was over with me. DIDN’T YOU ***** HEAR HER? SHE WANTS TO BE WITH ME!!”
“Your beef is with me,
You sick, demented mother-*****
“NO! TINA STAYS WITH ME. TELL HER, TINA!!”
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That was so fukking awesome.I hope Susan is okay.I hope the next chapter is a Canadian Wedding.Please oh please.
That was an amazing story I have enjoyed it so much and wow what an ending..Please psot another story.. You are one of my favorite autheros here..Post another soon Please and if you continue I hope Susan is ok..I like all those new characters…Thank you
holy mother of god, i totally forgot about nancy and now i remember in one chapter you said that bette and her will meet again soon under similar circumstances….i did feel that susan was good, and it was proven, and i’m kinda said for helena…well actually for peggy, it’s her daughter after all…i’m glad B&T are fine, let’s see the canadian wedding and susan will be okay i hope, she deserves to go home to her love…thanks for clearing everything
Great chapter, I didn’t expect is to be Faye’s daughter stalking them. Hopefully the wedding next looking forward to your next post.
brilliant… your payback was excellent… i have loved this story from the first chapter… i do hope you plan to comtinue…
DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD… THE WICKED BITCH IS DEAD
wow – that was exciting. i remembered about nancy. nothing about fayes daughter. helena, did a number on many people. this was a great story. hopefully you have another in the wings. thanks.
RC,
Another wondrous instalment which finally revealed some of the truth.
A mark of genius by have Susan double cross Helena and then bring Faye’s daughter Diana in to the mix to dish out some pay back.
Still breathing heavy from all those shocks.
I do hope that Susan will make a speedy recovery and that Bette and Tina get some personal time to reconnect after all of this horror.
Great to see Nancy back at the front line.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Your Loyal Fan.
RC, never saw all this coming. GREAT CHAPTER and just loved this story. Payback is hell isn’t it. So glad that Susan was not a bad guy and I should have seen this coming from little hints that you dropped awhile back. I wqas in law enforcement for almost 17 yrs. (Court side) and should have reconized some things but, no it all went by me. Never thought of Buckley’s daughter coming into the fray. Happy it ended with our girls allright and together and Nancy is OK!!!!!. Great story. Loved it. Let Susan be okay and go back to her girl. Thank you.
What an awesome ending bring on the next chapter
wow what an amazing turn of events. glad helena got what she deserved. hope susan is ok. cant wait to see the final.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! post soon
RC…That was truly AWESOME!!! I’m so glad that Susan is one of the good guys. Really hope Susan is going to be alright…she needs to get back to Dawn. OMG…this is great. Tina was in on it…dang…what a SURPRISE!! Really did enjoy the ride. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks RC..
wow never thought of the buckley daughter- great end for helena
OMG! that wa so intense and Thanks for Not harm Tina OK! I’m just gonna wait again to the next chapter Thanks for update!!
We have all curse Susan and also Helene, Never thought of Faye daughter.Hope that Susan is okay, and goes home to her love one. Poor Peggy, its hard to out live your child. thanks
you are soooooooo writing another series, no way…..no way are you gonna give u s such a great series and then dissapear, so GET WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just discovered your wonderful story about two days ago. Good thing I was able to catch up with all 81 chapters before you posted the finale (had to do the pesky school stuff in between reading your posts).
Your take on B&T’s story is quite different and innovative. Not the usual B&T fare. Your years as a legal reporter (if I remember right) has served you well. Maybe you can write one of those who dun it, murder mysteries which goes straight to #1 in the NY Times bestseller list, earn millions of dollars and ride off happily towards the sunset with your honey by your side. Of course the main protagonists would be B&T. Hehehe! A girl could dream, but I will buy your book if you ever decide to write it.
I hope you will continue to weave beautiful stories and thank you very much for sharing your passion with all of us.
OMG..how I love this story! and the bitch died. I have been waiting for that. I am going to be very sad to see this story end…promise us another?