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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 80 Read 79 above first!!

    Story written on October 24, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57266
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    Susan the Savior? Does everyone think so including Bette & Tina? Does HellBitch get Tina? Run to her, Bette, as fast as you can!!

     

    Yes, Helena, I will move this along and precious Tina will be sitting right next to you and Bette Porter will come running.  I’m going to do exactly what you want and then I’m gone.

     

    Susan smirked to herself and thought, You stupid *****, Helena.  Hasn’t anyone every told you, there’s no free lunch?

     

    She was refilling one of the coffee machines and just happened to look out one of the windows.  She looked right into the face of a woman standing on the sidewalk, looking back at her.  That’s the second time in the past week I’ve seen that woman.  She won’t come in.  If I’m right, in two seconds she’s going to put her head down and take off.   And that’s exactly what she did.  She met Susan’s gaze and almost immediately put her head down and took off down the street.

     

    Who the ***** is she?  Susan turned to one of the other counter people and said, “Do me a favor?  Finish filling this coffee machine.  I’ve got to run outside for just a minute.”

     

    She hurriedly got outside The Planet, looked down the street, but the woman was gone, out of sight, poof like a cloud of smoke.

     

    “Damn it,” Susan grumbled.  She was still talking to herself when she got back behind the counter.  “Damn it, who the ***** is she?”

     

    Susan didn’t see Alice standing there holding her empty cup.  “Something the matter?  Who the ***** is who?” asked Alice.

     

    “Oh, I was just trying to think of this woman’s name that I met years ago.  I thought she told me she moved out here, but I can’t think of her friggin’ name to even look her up.”

     

    “Yeah, it’s a ***** when the memory starts going, eh?  Fill me up, will ya?  It’s going to be a long day and I’m going to need all the leaded fuel I can get.”

     

    Susan filled her cup and Alice made her way back to the table.  Now, she was muttering under her breath.  “Yeah, right, somebody she met years ago, that’s poopie *****.  She may have beat Candace’s *****, but something else is going on I just know it.”

     

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    1. RC,

      An absolute shocker.

      All this drama is leaping off the screen and making a little movie in my head. As for the cliff hanger, thank you for torturing me a little longer. These events have kept me right on the edge of my seat. The deception is only now starting to make some sense however I am fascinated as to where you will lead next.

      This mystery is captivating and mesmerizing. I am completely enthralled by your wonderful writing. The pace has just ramped up several notches and like the runaway train is only just managing to stay on the rails

      Please continue real soon as I’m not sure my heart can take the waiting to long.

      Thank you for sharing your talent.

      Your Loyal Fan.

      PS – What happened to chapter 79?

    2. Ahh what’s going on?! I’m soo confused! I hope that Bette doesn’t fall for their trap. Is it a trap? *Scratches head* I have no idea. Post ASAP please!!!!

    5. you soo rock girl. the drama is fast and thick.

      “it was the bette porter take no prisoners stride.” wooo yaaaa. what a sight, for sure.

      rc this is rolling quite nicely. im on the edge of my seat, with my popcorn and my drink. i dont but do want you to hurry up. know what i mean. thanks.

    6. RC…damn what the hell is happening? I’m with Barrie…Is Susan a schizo? Is the other woman really Susan’s own reflection? Why did Tina say she was going to visit with Kit and just leave the baby instead? All questions and many more. Damn so much DRAMA..love it! Thanks for the chapter RC.

    9. Who is the mystery woman, who has Tina, will Bette be in time. will she kill both of them. Alice is on the ball. she knows to much.about Helene thanks

    14. Who is the woman outside The Planet? Is Susan a schizo? If Tina went to spend time with Kit, why wasn’t she there when Bette called? Why did she leave the baby with Kit? Good Lord, all ‘Hell’ has broken lose and all I have are questions! I hope your next chapter clears it all up and I also hope that the woman in the window is an ally to BnT…or Peggy!

    16. Oh come on arceextl, you not only leave us hanging as to the identity of our mistery woman, but now Bette and Shane are headed into the teeth of danger with no way of contacting anyone! Please post soon and reveal. Great suspensive chapter.

    19. i’m on the edge of my seat, all work is forgotten…who’s another woman, is she good or bed? i know hellno can’t win but she can give a scare, i don’t want anythign happening to the girls, great suspense, can’t wait for more

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