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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 80 Read 79 above first!!

    Story written on October 24, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57266
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    Susan the Savior? Does everyone think so including Bette & Tina? Does HellBitch get Tina? Run to her, Bette, as fast as you can!!

    The shrill of the phone ringing snapped her out of her lustful thoughts.

     

    “Bette Porter.”

     

    “Bette, it’s Susan.  II need totell”

     

    Bette didn’t like the sound of her voicesomething’s going on.

     

    “What is it, Susan?  I have a feeling you should be telling me something and it better be fast.”

     

    “Bette, I sold my soul to the devil”

     

    “Susan, WHAT THE ***** ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?  Is this about TinaWHERE IS TINA?? I’M GOING TO ***** KILL YOU.”

     

    “Bette, get over to my house, please now!  Helena is there and she has Tina.”

     

    Bette threw the phone down screamingshe’s got to call Kit and tell her.  She called The Planet and Kit said that Tina dropped off Angelica a couple hours ago.   Bette picked up the phone and called Shane.  She saw her truck there. She’s got to be home.

     

    “Shane, Shane.get over here right now, PLEASE!”

     

    “I’m there in two seconds, Bette.”  Shane ran over to Bette and Tina’s house.  Bette was in the living room pacing back and forth when Shane came bounding in.

     

    “Christ I’ve got to get out of here!”

     

    “What’s going on – just tell me, please, Bette.”

     

    “***** Susan is in cahoots with Helena!  She’s got – Helena‘s got Tina at Susan’s house!”

     

    “What!!! Oh, Jesus, Bette.  Let’s get over there.”

     

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    Bette’s SUV was speeding towards Susan’s house.  Shane and Bette were frantic and both had left their cell phones at their homes in their hurry to get going.   Neither would get the messages left by Alice.

     

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    “Where the ***** are you, Porter?  Why aren’t you answering your cell phone or the house phone?  FOR CHRISTSAKES CALL ME BACK!!  I just found out something about Susan!!  SHE ***** KNOWS HELENA!!  The house was bought by one of the companies in the Peabody Foundation!”

     

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    She picked up the phone, made the  call:

     

    “It’s happening today-NOW.  Move.”

     

     

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    As Bette continued the drive like a maniac to Susan LaFay’s house, the thoughts were racing through her mind:   I’m going to ***** kill Helena first – then Susan.   She had a feeling about her.   Alice, too.   Oh, God, not againif that ***** *****’ hurts one hair on Tina’s head –

     

     

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    1. RC,

      An absolute shocker.

      All this drama is leaping off the screen and making a little movie in my head. As for the cliff hanger, thank you for torturing me a little longer. These events have kept me right on the edge of my seat. The deception is only now starting to make some sense however I am fascinated as to where you will lead next.

      This mystery is captivating and mesmerizing. I am completely enthralled by your wonderful writing. The pace has just ramped up several notches and like the runaway train is only just managing to stay on the rails

      Please continue real soon as I’m not sure my heart can take the waiting to long.

      Thank you for sharing your talent.

      Your Loyal Fan.

      PS – What happened to chapter 79?

    2. Ahh what’s going on?! I’m soo confused! I hope that Bette doesn’t fall for their trap. Is it a trap? *Scratches head* I have no idea. Post ASAP please!!!!

    5. you soo rock girl. the drama is fast and thick.

      “it was the bette porter take no prisoners stride.” wooo yaaaa. what a sight, for sure.

      rc this is rolling quite nicely. im on the edge of my seat, with my popcorn and my drink. i dont but do want you to hurry up. know what i mean. thanks.

    6. RC…damn what the hell is happening? I’m with Barrie…Is Susan a schizo? Is the other woman really Susan’s own reflection? Why did Tina say she was going to visit with Kit and just leave the baby instead? All questions and many more. Damn so much DRAMA..love it! Thanks for the chapter RC.

    9. Who is the mystery woman, who has Tina, will Bette be in time. will she kill both of them. Alice is on the ball. she knows to much.about Helene thanks

    14. Who is the woman outside The Planet? Is Susan a schizo? If Tina went to spend time with Kit, why wasn’t she there when Bette called? Why did she leave the baby with Kit? Good Lord, all ‘Hell’ has broken lose and all I have are questions! I hope your next chapter clears it all up and I also hope that the woman in the window is an ally to BnT…or Peggy!

    16. Oh come on arceextl, you not only leave us hanging as to the identity of our mistery woman, but now Bette and Shane are headed into the teeth of danger with no way of contacting anyone! Please post soon and reveal. Great suspensive chapter.

    19. i’m on the edge of my seat, all work is forgotten…who’s another woman, is she good or bed? i know hellno can’t win but she can give a scare, i don’t want anythign happening to the girls, great suspense, can’t wait for more

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