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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“What’s that? What did you say?”
“I said..” Smiles sheepishly. “..I’ll go inside the car, open my purse, take out my cellphone and call you so that you can change the tire for me..”
“…”
“You’ll come to my rescue, right babe?”
“…”
“Porter..” Poke. “You okay?”
“You..” Narrows eyes. “You don’t know what you’re gonna do next after you take out the tools and the spare, do you?”
“No..”
“I demonstrated it four friggin’ times! My back is killing me and my arms are about to fall off! You watched me, did you not?”
“I did.” Nod. Nod.
“But did you listen?”
“No..” Shakes head.
“And why not?”
“Cause you distracted me..”
“Excuse me?”
“I was watching your ass..”
“…”
“It wasn’t entirely my fault though, cause I could see your thong when you bended down to change tires and stuff..”
“…”
“..then I saw your butt crack too. And you have to admit, that was pretty distracting..”
“…”
“Porter?”
“…”
“So quiet..” Poke. “Are you mad?”
“…”
Poke. “Are you?”
“I’m not.”
“Really?”
“I’m annoyed.”
“At me?”
“Oh nooo.. not you. I’m annoyed at myself.”
“Really? Aw, baby. But why?”
“…”
Chuckles nervously. “You were kidding just then weren’t you?”
“Uh-huh.”
“So you’re annoyed at me?”
“Damn right.”
“Annoyed enough not to do the..” Wink. Wink. Nudge. Nudge. “..upstairs with me, like you promised?”
“Yes.”
“What?!” Whiiine. “Nobody can be that annoyed!”
“Watch me.” Sticks out tongue and marches off to the entrance of the apartment building.
“But I can still feel the oyster magic flowing through my veins..”
“Tough luck.”
“Porteeerr…”
“Have fun with your cold shower Kennard..”
Pout. “I’ll remember this the next time you start to get frisky in public or when you start to grope me in the middle of the night..”
“And I’ll remember this every time you get hot and bothered after watching me apply vanilla lotion on my skin. Oh wait, that happens every night doesn’t it?” Smirks evilly before disappearing inside.
Gasp. “You wouldn’t..! Don’t you dare! BETTE PORTER!”
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“Porterrrrrrrrrrr!!!”
Bette shook herself awake right in time to catch someone shrieking her name into her ear, making her flinch and momentarily pull her bluetooth device from her ear. After making sure that her eardrums were still intact and that she could still hear from her right ear, she fitted the earpiece back into place.
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.