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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“Shit, can’t you just kiss me instead?!”
“I don’t kiss filthy, potty mouths.”
“Why not? I kiss your potty mouth all the time. Can’t you return the favor?”
“…”
“What?”
“Come here..”
“No.. I wont fall for that agai-”
Kiss.
“Okay, I gave you what you wanted. Now can we please get serious baby?”
“One more.”
“Kennard..”
“I want one more.”
Siiigh. “Fine.” Kiss. “Satisfied?”
“Not in the slightest, but okay, those will do for the meantime.”
“I’ll change the flat tire now. Watch me?”
“You don’t have to ask.”
One and a half hours later..
“..and that’s it!” Exhales loudly and wipes sweaty forehead on the sleeves of her shirt. “Phew. So do you get it?”
“I think I do.”
“Excellent! Come here..”
Kiss.
“Now..” Removes dirty gloves and throws it over the hood. “It’s time for the test.”
“Uh.. test? What test? You didn’t say anything about a test..”
“Don’t worry, this is just a review of everything I taught you a while ago. You paid attention right? I’m sure you’d do a good job..”
Laughs nervously. “Yeah.. I’m sure..”
“Ready?”
“No, but go ahead.”
“Okay, say you were driving DeeDee to USC when you accidentally snag a nail. Your right front wheel was damaged and you had to pull over to the side of the road to change it. What do you do next?”
“I’ll kill the engine, turn on the hazard lights and go down the car..”
“Uh-huh.”
“I’ll go to the flat tire, assess the damage and make sure that the other tires are okay. After that, I’ll place a rock behind, if facing uphill, or in front, if facing downhill, the diagonally opposing wheel to prevent the car from rolling..”
“Go on.”
“Then I go to the trunk, or in DeeDee’s case, the hood cause the engine’s at the back, and I take out the tools and the spare tire..”
“Okay, very good so far. But what tools do you need? Name them all please.”
“A tire iron, a car jack and in case the spare needs a little air, a tire inflater.”
“Impressive so far, baby.” Kiss. “Okay, what’s next?”
“Then uh..” Fidget. “I umm.. mmbbmmmlmmmeemmmmlll..”
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.