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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“Good.” Big smile. “Nympho.”
“You’re one to talk, Miss-lets-cut-class-to-have-sex-at-the-multimedia-room-and-a-quickie-inside-the-broom-closet..”
Lifts eyebrows. “If I remember correctly, you’re no innocent party in those encounters..”
“Yeah, but you instigated it.”
“Fine, I did. But enough stalling now and let’s do this.” Tugs Tina’s hand and pulls her to DeeDee’s right front wheel. “Now tell me what this is..”
“A tire?”
“Yes, it’s a tire. But what’s wrong with it?”
“Its deflated.”
“Uh-huh. It’s flat. Now what will I do with it?”
“Bend over and blow some air into it?” Smirks. “Oh wait, that won’t work. Too much Porter hot air and DeeDee will fly away like those Goodyear blimps..”
“…”
“Heh.”
“Clever Kennard, Cle-ver.”
“I tried.” Shrug.
Sigh. “Baby, can you quit fooling around please? This is serious stuff. You should learn this if you’re going to drive DeeDee to USC, I want you to be prepared in case anything happens. So stop it.”
“Stop what?”
“Stop grinning at me and focus.”
“I can’t.”
“Why not?”
“Cause I’m happy. Happy people can’t stop smiling.”
“No. Happy people are pleasant folks who smile at the right time and at the right situation, looney people with loose screws are the ones who can’t stop smiling.”
“Are you calling me crazy?”
“Hey, you said it, not me.”
“Meanie.” Pout.
“C’mon, baby, just focus for a while. You know I love seeing you smile, but this time, you need to be serious..”
“But it’s too difficult to this wipe away..” Points at lips.
Sigh. “Then wipe it off with this..”
“Ewwwww.. Porter!” Swats hand away. “I don’t want your filthy oil rag! Why can’t you just use this to wipe it away?” Points at Bette’s face.
“My lips?”
“Uh-huh.”
Quirks eyebrows. “Are you’re flirting with me?”
“Maybe I am.” Smiles. “Maybe I was seducing you with my smile..”
“You were?”
“I was.”
“Come here..” Curls finger. “Closer.. closer..”
“Like this?”
“Closer.”
Half-closes eyelids. “Like this?”
“Mm-hmm.” Smile. “Now close your eyes..” BITE.
“OWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccccccccckkkkkk!!!!! What was that for?!”
Laughs. “I’m sorry Kennard. But your lips were just asking for it.”
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.