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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“F-fat ass?!” Tina sputtered, her neck veins becoming prominent – a scary sight to behold. “You’ve got a lot of nerve calling me that you.. you.. Thomas Beatie wannabe!”
“Thomas Beatie?” Ken looked utterly bewildered, chomping on another Cheeto. “The heck is that?”
“The pregnant man, duh!”
“Pregnant?!” Ken made a disgusted face, appalled by the mere comparison. He hit his belly with a fist, blissfully ignoring the fact that his hand bounced from it like a trampoline. “These are rock hard abs!”
“Rock?” Tina laughed obnoxiously, munching on a fistful of junk food. “That’s a boulder!”
Ken’s expression soured. That was a low blow. “It took a lot of work to look like this..”
“Oh I’m sure.” Tina batted her lashes in sarcasm. “I bet guzzling beers and eating chips took some mighty heavy lifting. I just can’t imagine how much effort it took for you to lift a bottle from your lap to your lips. Must’ve been draining..”
“I’m only down to one per night..” Ken squinted his eyes, defending his daily alcohol consumption.
“One beer?”
“One case.” Ken shrugged. “I’m kidding!” He laughed and angled his head away, barely avoiding the hand that violently flew to hit the back of his head. “Two beers. Three at the most.”
“That’s still too much!” Tina reprimanded the man. He used to drink beers occasionally when she was still living in the apartment. Young as she was, Tina kept the older guy on a tight leash – and except during times when he would sneak a beer or two behind her back, Ken was pretty much a well trained house pet. But since the master was away, the old dog was back to his old tricks. “Your liver’s not young anymore Daddy. You should start taking better care of your body.”
“But you only live once!” Ken tried to reason out. “Who cares if I get a little sick over a few beers? At least I’d die happy.” And drunk, he added wistfully inside his mind.
“I care.” Tina glared at him. “I want you to live long. I want all my future children to have a silly grandfather who’d crack the corniest jokes and feed them too much sweets behind my back. I want that.”
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.