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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
    Author Notes:

    Match maid in heaven..

     

    Sonja pouted.

     

    “Don’t get me wrong, the dress itself is really not that bad. But I think its designed to showcase a woman’s dips and curves. But I’m sorry Sonja, I only see bumps and ridges and lumps and humps..” The heiress continued her unapologetic critique, offending the life out of her fashion-handicapped maid. “You sorta remind me of Willy when he won the state fair in Vermont..”

     

    “Willy?!” Sonja repeated, completely aghast. That was one of Mabel Porter’s prized pets. “He’s a pig!”

     

    “Precisely.”

     

    “I remind you of swine?”

     

    “Well that bow does..” The heiress pointed to Sonja’s chest. “It really looks like the ribbon they placed around his neck. Actually, now that I really think about it, the resemblance is quite striking. Bows on bacon, how cute..” Bette chuckled.

     

    “That’s rich coming from someone wearing an oversized toga.” Sonja returned the jab with a sly smile. “Is that the newest fashion trend from Milan?” She asked her ward, eyeing the golden cloth with interest. “You look like a spring roll..” She ribbed. Wait a minute.. she looked closely at Bette’s queer wrap-around and frowned. After a second, her eyes bugged out in shock. “Miss Bette! Is that the curtain from the dining room?!”

     

    “Of course not!” Bette blushed, pulling the garment tighter against her body.

     

    Sonja lifted a knowing eyebrow.

     

    “Its from one of the sitting rooms.” Bette admitted weakly. “I was semi-naked, I needed some cover.” She explained with a shrug. “I’ll ask one of the utility guys to put it back later..”

     

    “You better, before your dad notices its missing.” Sonja warned. She puckered her lips and appraised the girl. “It actually looks good on you..”

     

    “Thanks.” Bette mumbled. “But that’s a given cause I make everything look good..”

     

    “Always so humble..” Sonja teased.

     

    “I know.” Bette smiled. “Sonja?”

     

    “Yes Miss Bette?”

     

    “What the heck is that smell?” Bette lifted her nose and sniffed the air a couple of times. It’s been bothering her sense of smell from the moment she came into the room.

     

    “Oh that? Its probably my hair. I used the herbal shampoo I got last night at a beauty parlor, its scent is a little overpowering but I think its nice. Do you like it?” Sonja smiled, bending her head down and bringing wisps of her hair nearer to the heiress, letting her get a closer whiff.

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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