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Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”
With the next movements, Bette backs Tina up against the counter. Bette’s hand lets go of Tina’s and mounts the counter where Bette’s other hand joins it on the other side of Tina, while Tina presses her entire body up against Bette’s and moves her hands around Bette. Tina kisses her way from the mouthwatering lips to Bette’s ear, where she explores a moment with her mouth, and then moves down to her neck, mildly biting and lubricating it ever so longingly. Bette drops her head back and closes her eyes a moment as the feel and smell of Tina envelops her and her moan betrays her. Suddenly, Tina grabs hold of Bette with her arms, wrapping them all around her, and pushes her in a gentle motion away from the counter. As the two rotate entwined on the spot, Tina slows her voracious pace and brings her face forward to meet Bette’s while they stand there embraced.
TINA- (She rasps) “I can’t”
BETTE- (Bette is stupefied and gulps, thinking, as she adopts words of wisdom once spoken to her’Oh no, please don’t be impotent’) “What’s wrong? Are you ok? I’m sorryI thought this was what” (Tina interrupts her)
TINA- “I wantedI want itBette pleaseI can’t take it furtherplease take me where I want to go.” (Bette smiles a thousand watt voltage smile, suppresses a lump in her throat, and hugs Tina, spinning her around once more. She brings Tina face to face and touches her lips with her fingers, lovingly and longingly. Bette kisses her briefly and then takes her by the hand to her bedroom.)
BETTE- (Bette stands Tina near the side of the bed, holding her right hand, and affixes a sweet brief kiss on her lips.) “If you want me to stop at any point or if you feel uncomfortable at all, tell me.” (She kisses her again, as they slightly stand apart. Bette brings the back of Tina’s hand to her mouth and kisses it with a tender kiss, causing Tina to tilt her head and skip a beat as she searches for her next breath. Bette lowers Tina’s hand a short way and, while their eyes transfix, places the palm of Tina’s hand on her chest, near hear breast line, just above the top button of the light green shirt she was wearing. She caresses the hand briefly and indicates with subtle pressure on that hand that Tina is to keep it there. Then Bette follows the length of Tina’s arm with both of hers, rubbing the surface as she moves up the sleeve. Tina is lost in the heartbeat of the mocha beauty.
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(26 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
wonderful, intense and beautiful…thanks…keep their love flowing
Well that was amazing it took my breath away. What a beautiful job of writing.. Please continue..
Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?
Wonderful you have such a way with words at least we can have some happiness in fanfic!!!
That was the most beautiful,awesome and amazing love scene I have read in a long,long time thanks you so much.
Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!
Beautiful….
Incredibly lovely….wow…I just…yeah… :)
OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.
beautiful…I love the way you write.
I’m almost speechless! That was amazing, intense, beautiful. A passion that is so lacking in S3.
Wow! That was an awesome chapter. Can’t wait for more.
I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so well written.What a window into B&T you’ve opened.
That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)
that just left me fucking speechless…beautiful and so full of love…they way it should be
Wow, this is officially the most beautiful and intense love scene I have ever read. Thank you!
DAMN WOMAN THAT WAS INTENSE!!!!!!!!!! And I’m glad to say the “blueness” has subsided….LMAO!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL, TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!