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Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”
CHAPTER 11 – ‘And remember the truth that once was spoken”
(The gratifying and deep sleep suddenly ended for Tina. She opened her eyes and turned to look at the clock on the standit was three in the morning. She found herself outside Bette’s arms but not far from them. Bette was in the same position but closer to her own side of the bed when Tina awoke flat on her back. She turned her head to look at Bette. ‘It’s not a dreamit’s really not a dream,’ thought Tina. Her eyes focused on the beautiful woman, who was now visible only through the evening light provided by a rambunctious moon.
Tina’s eyes were wide open but she couldn’t get enough of the vision of Bette, just lying there. Tina turned onto her side and stared at Bette. She carefully examined her, from the top of her head to the exposed upper chest and nape. Bette’s hair had fallen back, allowing the view. Bette was right, Tina thought, she was exhausted. But now, she felt awake, she felt rested, and she was feeling a physical rejuvenation of a most intense sort.
Like a kid in a candy store, or like the unwise visitor to the wild who feeds the animals at her own risk that Bette spoke of, Tina slowly reached out her left hand and tentatively though longingly, touched Bette’s hair. She was gentle, so as not to stir the beautiful creature. Tina was besotted with the woman before her. She wanted to touch every inch of her.
Tina thought about her talk with Rose and how the latter had warned her to take things slowone step at a time. And this made sense, Tina thought. How could she do otherwise? This was all so new to her, and she truly felt as she had expressed to Bette before they retired for the evening- ‘I don’t know how to do this. I don’t know how to face this. I don’t know how fast or slow to go. I don’t know what the next step is supposed to be. But if nothing else, I know that all I want right now is to be with youeven if that just means we share the same bed.’
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(26 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
wonderful, intense and beautiful…thanks…keep their love flowing
Well that was amazing it took my breath away. What a beautiful job of writing.. Please continue..
Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?
Wonderful you have such a way with words at least we can have some happiness in fanfic!!!
That was the most beautiful,awesome and amazing love scene I have read in a long,long time thanks you so much.
Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!
Beautiful….
Incredibly lovely….wow…I just…yeah… :)
OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.
beautiful…I love the way you write.
I’m almost speechless! That was amazing, intense, beautiful. A passion that is so lacking in S3.
Wow! That was an awesome chapter. Can’t wait for more.
I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so well written.What a window into B&T you’ve opened.
That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)
that just left me fucking speechless…beautiful and so full of love…they way it should be
Wow, this is officially the most beautiful and intense love scene I have ever read. Thank you!
DAMN WOMAN THAT WAS INTENSE!!!!!!!!!! And I’m glad to say the “blueness” has subsided….LMAO!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL, TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!