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Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”
Bette’s hands now gently retreat along Tina’s bent arm, moving back to the hand on her chest, which she caresses again, as though to reassure, and then Bette moves her hands underneath Tina’s now sweating palm down to the buttons of her green shirtBette unfastens her buttons as all Tina can do now is stand there and watch Bette as she slowly undoes all the buttons of her shirt and then slides it off, letting it fall to the floor. Tina beholds Bette’s grace and the black lace bra covered bosom that causes her to endure a heat wave of emotion and want. And yet, Tina wouldn’t dare move her handthis was after all the only instruction she had to hold onto at this point.
Bette, now closer to Tina as the latter’s hand pulsates with every beat of Bette’s heart, covers Tina’s hand with her own and, using her right hand, calls up Tina’s left. Bette starts kissing the palm of Tina’s left hand as Tina’s eyes follow the tantalizing movements. Bette places Tina’s left hand on her face and rubs into the hand with her face. Bette then moves her own hands to the top of her pants, unbuttoning the last barrier of outer clothing as Tina continues to stare into her eyes. The pants slide to the floor. Bette steps out as she guides Tina a step back. Bette then guide’s Tina’s hand from her face, letting it graze along her neck, to her chest, next to the hand that Tina used to sense every heartbeat since it had been placed there. With that, Bette draws closer to Tina and by taking a route under the buttoned down shirt that was adorning the blonde beauty, Bette places her hands around Tina’s bear waste. Bette was barely able to stand upon the first touch of Tina’s soft body. Bette gently stroked the areas that were in contact with her hands, and provoked a glazed look over Tina’s eyes as she blinked ever so slowly and swallowed even more slowly. Bette looked at Tina, smiled, and gave her a green light of her own)
BETTE- “I’m all yours.”
TINA- (She exhaled. And, now understanding the invitation to explore, Tina began her search of this new landscape. She moved her hands slowly apart on Bette’s chest and then began to move them down. Tina’s palms covered what the lace did not and then, as though looking at a treasure she had only envisioned in the past, cupped Bette’s endowments, encircling them and manipulating them over the lace. This caused Bette to raise her head and close her eyes briefly. Bette’s stroking of Tina’s bare midsection now intensified and Tina was moved to a closer exploration of Bette’s upper body. Tina stopped the effort that was hampered by the lace in order to raise both hands along Bette’s body to her shoulders. Tina’s fingers invaded the lace obstacle, first sliding her fingers underneath the straps, then slowly pulling them down, and finally sliding her hands back to what was exposed above the lace. Instead of moving her hands further down, Tina slid them to the sides of Bette’s chest and inserted them between the soft mocha skin and the large horizontal straps, and moved them along this path until reaching Bette’s back and the latch that was then quickly undone.
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(26 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
wonderful, intense and beautiful…thanks…keep their love flowing
Well that was amazing it took my breath away. What a beautiful job of writing.. Please continue..
Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?
Wonderful you have such a way with words at least we can have some happiness in fanfic!!!
That was the most beautiful,awesome and amazing love scene I have read in a long,long time thanks you so much.
Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!
Beautiful….
Incredibly lovely….wow…I just…yeah… :)
OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.
beautiful…I love the way you write.
I’m almost speechless! That was amazing, intense, beautiful. A passion that is so lacking in S3.
Wow! That was an awesome chapter. Can’t wait for more.
I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so well written.What a window into B&T you’ve opened.
That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)
that just left me fucking speechless…beautiful and so full of love…they way it should be
Wow, this is officially the most beautiful and intense love scene I have ever read. Thank you!
DAMN WOMAN THAT WAS INTENSE!!!!!!!!!! And I’m glad to say the “blueness” has subsided….LMAO!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL, TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!