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    Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”

    Story written on February 2, 2006 by TMerlin.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=59383
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina find an ending and a beginning.

     

    Bette started to dream once again.  She found herself on a shore, looking out into the sea and onto the horizon, calling out to God himself with her thoughts again.  As the waves pummeled the shore, her thoughts went out to Him in a cadence, as they had that day at the beach near Rose’s house.  She wanted to know where He was and why He hadn’t answered her call in the times of the recent void that had enveloped her life.  She turned to her right, looking down the shore, and then she felt a hand on her shoulder.  As she turned to see, what one might expect was a naked woman, she saw no one, but further down the shore she saw herself, wearing the suit she had on during her last day at work.  And even further down the shore, beyond this vision of herself, she saw a tall, elegant woman, walking toward her former selfit was Bassey.  As she looked on perplexed, she started to hear a voice calling out to her from the opposite direction.  Bette turned to look down the shore and saw a figure of a woman coming towards her from the distanceshe heard the woman call her nameand as this woman approached, closer and closer, she realized it was Tina.  She whispered Tina’s name and began to walk towards her, neglecting and forsaking all that she had seen behind her.  Bette began to cry as she called out Tina’s name and as she quickened her pace toward her.  Finally, she reached within touching distance of Tina and stared into her striking eyes and glowing faceshe wouldn’t see the end of this dream.  Bette awoke to find herself sitting up, crying, with Tina next to her holding her)

     

    TINA-  “BetteBetteit’s okI’m hereit’s just a dream.”

     

    (Bette looked up into Tina’s eyes in wonder.  A lump came to her throat as a thought came to her eyes.  As tears rolled down her face, Bette inexplicably remembered a time she had spent in New York.  She remembered sitting in a Broadway theatre watching a most fantastic musicalLes Miserables.  As she looks into her lover’s eyesher saviour’s windows to what she thought must be a most beautiful soulBette suddenly remembered the lyrics to a song that was played at the end of the musical.  She recalled a poignant lyric that struck her that night in New Yorkshe remembered that last original line sung by the main character before the chorus remerged with the repeated refrainshe looked into Tina’s eyes and heard the lyrics that had enchanted her “And remember the truth that once was spokento love another person is to see the face of God.”  She wept and raised her hand to touch Tina’s face.  Tina held Bette’s face and kissed her.  She held her tight as she stroked Bette’s head.

     

    TINA-  “I’m hereit’s okit’s ok.  I love you.”  (And Tina, both moved and a little perplexed by the intensity that she witnessed, thought how no matter what happened now or tomorrow, that this was to be the most profound love of her life.)

     

    BETTE-  (And as her lover rocked her to peaceful heightsshe uttered her last refrain)  “I love youI love youI love you”

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    3. Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?

    6. Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!

    9. OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.

    13. I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!

    15. That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)

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