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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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It was the truth, Tina had accidentally left her phone at home and when driving to the school, she was about to call Marcus and ask if he wanted to meet her so they could talk but realize it was nowhere to be found. Ignoring the excuse Tina had given him, Henry ranted on.
Henry: no I know what’s been happening, you were with HIM again, were you?
Tina: honestly Henry I haven’t been with anyone today. The only person I communicated with was Christie’s friend mom that’s it.
Henry: and what did you tell her?
This question made Tina freeze up, of course if Henry found out that she told Bette that he beats her, he would be angry and who knows what might happen, she knew she had to lie quickly.
Tina: oh nothing we just talked about the girl’s school, you know things like that.
Henry: when did Christie befriend that little brat anyway I never seen her around before…I guess you aren’t the only one who loves COLOREDS too huh?
Tina snapped her head around to look at Henry with such anger and rage…how dare he say something so disgusting and prejudice like that…she knew right then if not ever, that she hated his fucking guts and she was going to get out of this dysfunctional marriage if it be the last thing she do.
They arrived home five minutes later and after Henry opened the door, he grabbed a hold on to Tina’s wrist and gave instructions to Christie for her to go in her room and shut the door.
Henry: Christie baby, mommy and daddy need to have a little talk, why don’t you go to your room and play for a while.
Christie just stood there staring at her mother.
Tina: Its ok sweetheart go on, I’m going to talk to daddy for a minute then I will be in there to help you with your homework.
Christie looked back from Henry then to Tina before walking away. As soon as Henry heard the door shut, he reached behind and slapped Tina to the floor making her hit the wall slightly before knocking her down.
Henry: Next time I call and you don’t answer the phone, you going to wish you had.
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!