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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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After Bette denied Henry’s handshake she turned her attention back to Tina who was standing there almost trembling…please don’t go back with this man…Bette was saying to Tina with her eyes. I don’t want to but I’m so scared of what he might do…Tina was answering back with her eyes to Bette.
Bette: um Henry I was just asking your lovely wife if she and Christie would like to join me and my daughter here for lunch today
Henry: oh that sounds lovely…
Henry faked his happiness, and then turned to look Tina straight in the eyes with a slight frown.
Henry: baby it’s up to you if you want to go…I will be ok at home…alone.
He then grab hold of Tina’s hand and gave it a strong, tight, squeeze, while putting on a fake smile.
None of this was unnoticed by Bette, she knew even though Henry tried to show happiness he was really furious with the thought of Tina leaving.
Tina: um (clearing her throat)…I think I will have to take you up on that offer another time Bette, but it was nice meeting you, and Angelica I hope to see you again sweetie.
Tina was looking at Angelica then up to
Bette….I’m really sorry…she pleaded with her eyes one last time.
Bette: of course…and if there’s ANYTHING you need or want to talk about…here is my number.
Tina: Thank you Bette.
Bette handed Tina her card, and both women turned to walk away in different directions.
Inside the Kennard’s car
Tina sat silently in the car on the ride home…her mind was running with thoughts of what she should do. She wanted to leave Henry, she really did because let’s face it, it’s not like she loved him or was in love with him…at one time yes she loved him truly but now the only thing she felt for him was fear. Her thoughts were interrupted with the voice she had come to cringe at the thought of hearing.
Henry: why weren’t you answering your phone? I’ve been trying to call you. Why do you like to make me worry about you huh? Do you want me to get upset?
Tina: I left my phone at home, I wasn’t aware of it til on my way to Christie’s school.
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!