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A Leap Of Faith (Chapter 3)
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The pair sat down on the sofa and began to catch up on their lives, the past few weeks had gone by with little contact between them so it was such a relief to be able to talk openly about what they’d been doing, things that had made them laugh, and their plans for the coming season.
As Dana finished off the last of the second bottle of wine, she was feeling confident enough to reach over and take Alice’s hand in hers. Alice put down her empty glass and turned to face Dana, she knew she couldn’t avoid talking about what she did, and now seemed to be the perfect time, the evening had gone well and there were no other interruptions…
Dana: Al, I’ve really missed you over the past few weeks, it’s great to see you again, and laugh with you again…
Alice: I know, I’ve missed you too… and I’m sorry that we haven’t done this sooner, it’s just that I haven’t known what to say, I’ve been such an idiot Dana and I’m sorry…
Dana: No I was an idiot, I’m sorry…
Alice: No, Dane please, let me explain…
With that, Alice tentatively started to explain her actions to Dana; she thought it would be best if she just tried to rebuild their friendship, and ignore how she really felt, because Dana was the best thing in her life and without her she was nothing.
As Dana listened intently to Alice, she couldn’t help the feeling of disappointment that swept over her when she heard Alice refer to them as ‘just friends.’ She couldn’t understand her feelings, Alice was her very best friend, yet that night, she felt something in that kiss that she had never felt before, and since then she had hungered for that feeling again. As Dana examined Alice’s features, she could tell that there was something she was hiding from her… and if they had any hope at a future, friends or otherwise, then Dana needed to know how Alice truly felt, or else the mistruths would tear them apart.
Dana: (softly) Don’t lie to me Alice, I know you too well…
Alice looked down when she heard Dana’s words; she thought she was doing so well convincing Dana (and herself) that it was all a stupid mistake. Again Alice sighed, her eyes started to water; she wasn’t sure she could tell Dana how she really felt because it meant risking the very foundations of their friendship… but without honesty, she reasoned, what hope was there?
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aww man, just when they are getting somewhere Alice runs off. why do i feel like they’re going to have to go through hell before anything good happens? lol great update…please post soon!
no wayyy ty so much for the brilliance tho i think that’s a bit much! lol but enough about that.. HOORAY! lol im telling you i just hold ALOF in my arms for safe keeping cuz i love the beginnings of Danish and they way you have it all laid out is just great! Well.. i only allow short chaps if its packed with greatness… and this was fantastic so its allowed! even Alice stopping at the end and leaving was great because it just keeps me glued here waiting to see how they are going to dance around this situation. and how Tonya gets kicked to the curb! lol Post SOON SOON or.. when you can :) oh and glad to hear your feeling better!
Aww just the one page, I was just getting really into it, post agin soon! -x-
Loved it! The tension was always one of the things that made it so great when they finally went for it! I can see that it will be that way in this too. I could feel the tension between them! Great story, and you have their emotions down so damn well! Please post again soon! :-)
Nice.I’m liking this story! Keep up the good work :D It’s a great start. Post soon.
Hey, great update! You didn’t lie about the tension, and I hope you post more, soon!
just one page??? that’s as much as a tease as what you wrote on that one page! i love it… please post again soon.
Wow, so many Danish stories at the moment, it’s hard to keep track. :) I always love stories which start right after the 4 AM-kiss. So, keep it up! Btw, is your name from the song from Billie Meyers (love that song).
that was pretty fucking intense.