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Daughter of a Criminal
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Ignoring the intense staring, she quickly made her way through the crowded hallway to the parking lot, some guys calling her to hang out with them. She was not in the mood after the brief discussion with Stella so she turned them down.
“Tina?” The familiar, yet strange voice appeared behind the blonde as she went to her car. “I… wanted to tell you something.”
She rarely heard the brunette speak, just the times their Spanish teacher asked her to read the text. Bette spoke wonderful Spanish and her voice was always gentle, not very emotion-revealing, but soft like wind caressing the spring leaves. It somehow disrupted the tranquility inside her, leaves falling into the lake causing a hundred small ripples. “Hi, Bette…”
The brown eyes searched deeply into the hazel pools. Bette struggled a little.
“What do you want to tell me?” Tina could see the battling thoughts through the brunette’s eyes. God she loved those hot chocolate colored eyes, they were so real, so sincere.
Under the mild encouragement, Bette closed her eyes for a second, reopened them, and parted her lips. “I… like you, Tina. Will you go out with me…?” Her voice soft like a breeze, the sentence disappeared in the short distance between them as if it was never spoken, however, it completely stirred the quiet and peace in Tina’s heart.
“Oh my god you FREAK!!!” Suddenly a shriek startled both of the girls. Stella and some other girls were approaching fast to Tina as if they had to save her from the most horrific catastrophe she’d ever experience. They quickly arrived at Tina’s side and pulled her away from Bette.
It made the brunette take a step back.
The terrified look on Bette’s face broke her heart. Tina tried to struggle out from her friend’s “protective” arm. “Stella!”
“Tina! What are you doing? She’s dangerous! Her dad murdered all those people, don’t you remember? Eight! Eight people died because of her!”
Never had someone said that in her face, Bette instantly turned pale. Not entirely because it was cruel, but because she was embarrassed, criticized and humiliated in front of the girl she loved.
“Enough!” Tina couldn’t bear the deeply hurt look on the brunette’s face. She shoved at Stella’s hand and walked up to Bette. “Bette… I’m sorry.”
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…