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Daughter of a Criminal
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That changed when she met this incredibly bright and smart girl in Spanish class. Bette would smile like she rarely did at the memory of their first encounter.
She was just walking to the class with bulky books and dictionaries in her hands, running slightly late. A slim, blonde girl was rushing from the other side of the hallway and nearly crashed into her. She dropped her books and tripped herself over them.
“Oh my god I’m so sorry! Are you ok?” The girl asked, hurriedly bending down to pick up her books. “I’m sorry, I just transferred here. The classrooms are driving me crazy.” She had an embarrassed smile, and her face slightly reddened because of the rushing.
It was a sight that completely took Bette’s breath away. With some strange clumsiness, she climbed up and took over her books, and awkwardly asked. “Wha—what class do you… are you nee—trying to find?” Suddenly she couldn’t even speak English.
It made the girl chuckle, a chartreuse colored glimmer shined in those hazel eyes. “Spanish, third semester.”
“Oh it’s where I’m going… It’s uh… here.” Bette pointed at the room not too far away.
“Oh thank god! At least I won’t be late for all my classes today.” The girl laughed her light-hearted laugh, as if nothing could discourage her. “Thank you for helping me find it! I’m Tina Kennard by the way.” She reached her hand out.
Just as Bette wanted to take the lithe, pale hand in hers with a bit eagerness, they were interrupted by someone.
“Tina! You got Spanish too? You gotta sit next to me!” Stella grabbed Tina’s hand before the handshake and immediately guided her into the room.
Tina tried to resist and resume her conversation with this clumsy but very cute girl, she heard Stella whisper to her, “you don’t wanna be seen with her, Tina.”
“But—” as she attempted to protest and ask Stella the reason, she was already pushed into the classroom and the bell rang.
Bette stood there, with her hand hanging in the air, feeling her heart nearly ripped apart. Then she dropped her hand hopelessly, and murmured to herself, “I’m… Bette.”
The smile disappeared as her thought came to the end of it. She always wondered what if the redhead wasn’t there to interrupt them that day, what if she got a chance to really talk to Tina and get to know her. Maybe… just maybe she could have eventually found a friend.
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…