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Daughter of a Criminal
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Back home, a middle-aged woman was busy preparing meal and humming to herself. She heard her daughter coming back so she put on a warm smile to greet her, only to greet the sad girl with red nose and puffed eyes. “Oh no, Bette, what’s wrong baby?” She put down the spatula and came to take her little girl into a hug.
Bette shrunk out of the hug and hung her head down. “Mom, I want us to move.”
“But sweetheart, we just got here. You have to give it time…”
“Mom! I’ve been here three years. It just keeps getting worse. I can’t take it mom… There’s no one, NO ONE!” And just as she thought there were no tears left, they erupted again. “What’s wrong with me mom? Why do I have to be punished by something dad did? Why does it got to be me?” Bette lost her stance and fell to her knees.
The woman slowly knelt down beside her and wrapped her arms around her daughter. “I’m sorry baby. I’m sorry you have to go through all this.” Of course she knew that Bette was having a rough time, in fact, her daughter had been having a rough time ever since her husband was imprisoned and sentenced to a death row. A mother always knew.
“Can we please move…?”
“Yes baby. We’ll move tomorrow.”
Tina felt sick to her stomach as she drove pass her house and her neighborhood. She pulled up at the dirt road and threw up, feeling her insides burning. She dialed a number afterwords. “Dane, I think… I did something wrong.”
“Tina? What is it, hon?”
Dana was her best friend back in her old town, and she always gave the blonde good advice, always can console her and help her deal with difficulties. Tina needed her best friend. She told her everything. “I just… I panicked and I think we really hurt her.”
“She sounds like a good person. Is she? A good person?”
“I don’t know, Dane. I really don’t know now. I thought she was such a sweetheart but you should see the look in her eyes today, it was so… I was scared. I mean…is that how other people see her all this time, terrifying, dangerous? Was I only seeing what I wanted to see?”
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…