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Daughter of a Criminal
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Criminal
Chapter 1. Daughter of a criminal
“Pts, pts, Tina,” A redhead whispered to her seat mate during a review session, and pointed discreetly to a girl several seats away from theirs, “look that freak is staring at ya again.”
Tina didn’t have to turn her head to know what her friend was talking about. “That’s very rude of you, Stella.”
“Me? Whoa whoa whoa, I’m not the one stalking you and creeping people out around.” The other girl scowled at her friend and glanced back at the staring girl again. “Now she’s just freaky, ok? Who does that? I mean… we get that she has the hots for you and all, but seriously!”
“She’s not a bad person. She’s just… shy, I think.”
“I wouldn’t be so sure about that. Everybody knows what her dad—” Stella continued but was cut off by the blonde.
“It’s none of your business, Stella!” Tina gave her friend a glare. “Now can we get back to the questions now?”
“Ok I’ll pretend you did not just defend HER. For all you know she could be a sociopath.” Stella puffed, biting the end of her pencil and glanced at the girl with those indecipherable dark eyes couple of rows behind them one last time.
The owner of the dark eyes finally redirected her attention back to her book, but with a heavy sigh. “I…really like you—no, I love you, Tina.” She mouthed the sentence to herself silently and then made a decision. “I’m gonna tell you. There’s nothing to lose, I’m gonna tell you.”
If there was any girl that didn’t have a single friend in this school, it would be Bette Porter. It was not like that in the beginning of her moving here. She moved to this town with her mother and started her 9th grade. For a short moment, she was making friends, or at least knowing someone that she considered friends at the time. But like what happened before, rumors spread out the campus and there again, she was alienated by the rest of the students.
Never had she done a single thing wrong, she got good grades, she could run tracks, and she was a good-mannered, soft-spoken teenage girl, but nobody wanted to go near her. After a long time of being alone, she stopped caring, and began to shut herself down.
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…