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To Live Without You (Chapter 19)
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The writer quietly walked over to Dana bringing the athlete to her feet and began taking off her shirt, buttoning her pants pulling them down and allowing Dana to sit back down on the bed. Alice kneeled in front of the athlete and slipped the jeans off her legs, pulling off her socks and directing Dana to lay down. The athlete wanted to move, to tell the writer that helping her wasn’t necessary but as Alice cared for her all Dana could do was stare at the writer’s silhouette in the dark room, her heart beating hard in her chest. Alice crawled in the bed next to the athlete, pulling Dana into her arms, their bodies molding together so tightly air couldn’t pass between them.
Alice hands made slow circles against Dana’s back comforting the athlete, commanding Dana’s muscles to relax. The athlete sighed pulling back from Alice, resting her forehead against the writers. Dana breathed lightly on the writer’s lips, reaching out achingly slow to kiss them. The athlete placed loving pecks on Alice’s lips, each kiss becoming deeper. The writer was sure Dana would try to go further, one thing she knew about the athlete was that when Dana was drunk she was always horny as hell and a little aggressive in a sexy way.
But the athlete never pushed for more, Dana simply traced Alice’s lips with her tongue memorizing every texture of the writer’s mouth. The athlete’s eyes began to close but Dana never said a word as she drifted off to sleep, Alice held the athlete close, tears silently falling. The writer could feel herself slipping; she could feel all of the passion and love she once thought she’d lost for Dana, burning across her very being. Alice sighed realizing the feeling would never go away, she simply loved Dana too much to move on, the writer could pretend but she’d be there for the athlete every time.
Alice held on to Dana tightly resting her head in the athlete’s shoulder and falling into a content sleep.
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Victoria pushed open Dana’s bedroom door and a big smile crossed her face, Alice and Dana were still sleep in each others arms, the picture so cute the double’s partner almost hated breaking it up…almost.
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I was so glad to see that you updated this story…Not that I don’t love Apogee but this one is my favorite. And they do need to talk but this was a good start as well. And Alice was right Dana did that on purpose…hahaha go Dana! Looking forward to the talk(s) so keep um coming.
I agree – definitely on purpose! Thanks for the update.
Oh how I love and miss this story! I’m really glad that you updated this! Alice and Dana just need to get over themselves (and their addictions), and realize that they both still love each other a lot. Danish was meant to be together, and I hope that when they talk they realize that. I love the way you write these characters, because it is so dead on. I can picture everything perfectly! Great job, and please update again soon. I always look forward to reading whatever you write, because it’s all incredible! :-)
Awww… you dedicated this one to me, you’re so sweet, sugar. And thats why I call you sugar, lol. Poor Dana is such a mess. I love that she’s so appealing whether she’s messed up or not. I’m relieved that she’s not a sloppy drunk, lol. I found the kissing to be rather sexy… wonder how you’d be with a few drinks sugar. I find it amazing Alice can sleep next to her in bed with only her underwear…. and nothing happens. Wow… what will power, lol. Wonder what would’ve happened if Vic didn’t wake them up… if it would’ve played out differently. I can feel the tension building between the two but there is nothing wrong with that, lol. I like the little tiff… then Dana strolls around naked, and of course Alice can’t help but look. Looks like Dana knows how to push Alice’s buttons, lol. That was a great addition to your story… and it took awhile but at least you’re still writing it. Please post another soon… I’ll trade some of those hershey kisses if I have to. I love you sugar.
i love this story. i actually forgot about it since its been so long since you updated it. but it was a good one. you need to do it more often. i am glad that alice is finally realizing that the only one for her is dana. but dana definitely needs some help.
You left me hanging when I read the snippet (ending with the question). But Alice said yes! And that was the most excited I got this chapter, because the rest of chapter frustrated the hell out of me. *reliefs sighs of frustrations* When will they pull it together? Dana needs to get of the drugs and the booze and Alice needs to make up her mind. As for Dana stripping in front of Alice, she didn’t do it on purpose. I just blame it on Dana being an athlete and she is used to walking around naked around other women in the locker room. I’ll bet you she never gave it a second thought… :P
I only have a minute, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the update. Great job. I look forward to reading more, and can’t wait to see where you take this. Bring on the Danish!
I finally registered on this thing so now I can let you know (once again) how much I love this fic. You write the characters perfectly :D I can’t wait for the next chapter. I know you’re trying… so try harder :P
Thanks for the great chapter ClosetDana =)
Ooh naughty naked Dana.. I bet that was a sight to see lol. Oh and cuddling in bed together in just their underwear was very sexy! Hmmm. Even tho there is a lot to sort out between Danish it was nice to see Alice being there for Dana, and the emotions they are both feeling for each other are building up nicely!! Alice now needs to get Dana off these pills.. then maybe they can talk more openly. Great chapter, post soon. Thanks. Ps tenterhooks sort of means anticipation so that is good? [for me anyway] lol.
oh that dana… she’s not as clueless as people think. she totally did that on purpose. looking forward to your next post, can’t wait to hear this talk they are going to have.
Great update – keep it coming.
I hate being repititious with my comments, but I’m so glad that you updated this. Srill finding it hard to believe that nothing else happened between Alice and Dana even with Dana being intoxicated, but it was great all the same. Can’t wait for the talk, so please post soon!
I think making Dana the scapegoat was just your way of taking the attention off of yourself. Again you leave us hanging …. such delicious torment. I so completely love this fic. While I do love Apogee, I love this one just a little bit more & can’t wait for the next update.