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To Live Without You (Chapter 19)
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The athlete moved closer to capture the writer’s lips again but Alice stopped her with two hands on Dana’s shoulder,
“Wait Dana, that’s not why I came.” The writer said plainly, Dana’s face looked confused for a moment as she drunkenly tried to comprehend what was happening.
“Yes it is Alice, that’s all you want from me. You want me to fuck you…and I’ll do it. I’ll fuck you and you can walk right out of the door back to Cliff, I’d rather have you for this moment than never again.” Dana said, the weight of intoxication pulling at the athlete’s common sense sending her further into depression. There was a long moment of silence as Alice stared at Dana, the writer couldn’t believe that’s how the athlete saw her. Alice sighed,
“I’m going to say that was the alcohol talking, Dana you know that’s not what I want from you.” The writer said, Alice knew better than to try and reason or hold such an important conversation with a drunk but Dana’s comments were hitting a nerve.
“I’m not so drunk that I don’t know what I’m saying Alice. You come around and you fuck with my head…turn me on and walk away, let’s just do it Al. I know what you’re came here to say, you want to go back to Cliff…well fuck. I lose again, which isn’t such a rarity these days.” Dana said, the athlete’s voice becoming louder, Alice tried to tell herself that Dana was just drunk but the writer was getting angrier by the second. Alice lashed out
“You’re right Dana you’ve become quite the loser, but you know what? You don’t have a problem right now that you haven’t brought on yourself. It’s you Dana, it’s not me or Victoria, or a pulled muscle…it’s you. You fucked things up for yourself, now I’m sorry for leading you on, it was never my intention, but don’t pretend that we weren’t friends first. And don’t act like I’ve never been concerned with your well being…I still love you.” The writer said. She had started her rant yelling but by the end of it all she could do was whisper the last few words. Dana looked stunned, the athlete tried to say something back, but there was nothing to say. Alice stood up abruptly,
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I was so glad to see that you updated this story…Not that I don’t love Apogee but this one is my favorite. And they do need to talk but this was a good start as well. And Alice was right Dana did that on purpose…hahaha go Dana! Looking forward to the talk(s) so keep um coming.
I agree – definitely on purpose! Thanks for the update.
Oh how I love and miss this story! I’m really glad that you updated this! Alice and Dana just need to get over themselves (and their addictions), and realize that they both still love each other a lot. Danish was meant to be together, and I hope that when they talk they realize that. I love the way you write these characters, because it is so dead on. I can picture everything perfectly! Great job, and please update again soon. I always look forward to reading whatever you write, because it’s all incredible! :-)
Awww… you dedicated this one to me, you’re so sweet, sugar. And thats why I call you sugar, lol. Poor Dana is such a mess. I love that she’s so appealing whether she’s messed up or not. I’m relieved that she’s not a sloppy drunk, lol. I found the kissing to be rather sexy… wonder how you’d be with a few drinks sugar. I find it amazing Alice can sleep next to her in bed with only her underwear…. and nothing happens. Wow… what will power, lol. Wonder what would’ve happened if Vic didn’t wake them up… if it would’ve played out differently. I can feel the tension building between the two but there is nothing wrong with that, lol. I like the little tiff… then Dana strolls around naked, and of course Alice can’t help but look. Looks like Dana knows how to push Alice’s buttons, lol. That was a great addition to your story… and it took awhile but at least you’re still writing it. Please post another soon… I’ll trade some of those hershey kisses if I have to. I love you sugar.
i love this story. i actually forgot about it since its been so long since you updated it. but it was a good one. you need to do it more often. i am glad that alice is finally realizing that the only one for her is dana. but dana definitely needs some help.
You left me hanging when I read the snippet (ending with the question). But Alice said yes! And that was the most excited I got this chapter, because the rest of chapter frustrated the hell out of me. *reliefs sighs of frustrations* When will they pull it together? Dana needs to get of the drugs and the booze and Alice needs to make up her mind. As for Dana stripping in front of Alice, she didn’t do it on purpose. I just blame it on Dana being an athlete and she is used to walking around naked around other women in the locker room. I’ll bet you she never gave it a second thought… :P
I only have a minute, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the update. Great job. I look forward to reading more, and can’t wait to see where you take this. Bring on the Danish!
I finally registered on this thing so now I can let you know (once again) how much I love this fic. You write the characters perfectly :D I can’t wait for the next chapter. I know you’re trying… so try harder :P
Thanks for the great chapter ClosetDana =)
Ooh naughty naked Dana.. I bet that was a sight to see lol. Oh and cuddling in bed together in just their underwear was very sexy! Hmmm. Even tho there is a lot to sort out between Danish it was nice to see Alice being there for Dana, and the emotions they are both feeling for each other are building up nicely!! Alice now needs to get Dana off these pills.. then maybe they can talk more openly. Great chapter, post soon. Thanks. Ps tenterhooks sort of means anticipation so that is good? [for me anyway] lol.
oh that dana… she’s not as clueless as people think. she totally did that on purpose. looking forward to your next post, can’t wait to hear this talk they are going to have.
Great update – keep it coming.
I hate being repititious with my comments, but I’m so glad that you updated this. Srill finding it hard to believe that nothing else happened between Alice and Dana even with Dana being intoxicated, but it was great all the same. Can’t wait for the talk, so please post soon!
I think making Dana the scapegoat was just your way of taking the attention off of yourself. Again you leave us hanging …. such delicious torment. I so completely love this fic. While I do love Apogee, I love this one just a little bit more & can’t wait for the next update.