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To Live Without You (Chapter 19)
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Ok folks here is the new chapter, sorry it took so long but with everything that’s been going on with the other story it’s really hard to switch gears. I dedicate this story to brteyes, everything I write and all that I do is for you my love.
ClosetDana
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The writer stared at Dana silent, this was the first time they’d seen each other since Alice walked out on the athlete. Dana’s eyes looked vacant and the writer knew that everything Victoria had said was true, if anything Alice thought the situation might be worse than Victoria had said. Alice stared at Dana’s downcast eyes, the writer could tell she was drunk.
“I wanted to tell you congratulations…on the win today, I watched it on…t.v. um, can I come in?” Alice fumbled over her words seeing that Dana obviously not pleased with her earlier performance or the present congratulations.
The athlete ushered Alice in, the writer immediately taking notice to the empty beer bottles on the living room table and the game highlights that were paused onscreen. Dana turned off the t.v. quickly and flopped onto the couch, the athlete was never one to drink alone, and judging from the bottles strewn about the house it was safe to say Alice knew Dana was on the edge of shit-faced drunk. The writer found a half-empty bottle and took a sip, the athlete still staring at her,
“I know you’re wondering what I’m doing here and I really don’t have a good answer, because I really don’t know.” Alice said, staring at anything but the athlete’s eyes, Dana moved closer and the writer watched her movements closely.
“I know why you’re here.” Dana said with confidence, her speech was a bit drawled and Alice wasn’t even sure they’d be able to talk. As the writer fought with how she was going to approach Dana, the athlete abruptly kissed her.
Alice froze as the sensations of the athlete’s lips shot through her body, the athlete was drunk, but that didn’t stop the writer’s body from responding. Alice opened her mouth hesitantly as Dana moved her tongue slowly in the writer’s mouth. Alice found it a little strange that Dana didn’t kiss like a drunk, but the writer could taste the alcohol and see the glazed look in the athlete’s eyes. Alice pulled back trying to get it together, she was still a little high from earlier and it seemed like whenever Dana touched her or kissed her the writer lost momentary control over her body. Alice turned taking another long sip of beer, she knew this wouldn’t get her drunk or even tipsy, but she had to put her lips somewhere other than on Dana’s.
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I was so glad to see that you updated this story…Not that I don’t love Apogee but this one is my favorite. And they do need to talk but this was a good start as well. And Alice was right Dana did that on purpose…hahaha go Dana! Looking forward to the talk(s) so keep um coming.
I agree – definitely on purpose! Thanks for the update.
Oh how I love and miss this story! I’m really glad that you updated this! Alice and Dana just need to get over themselves (and their addictions), and realize that they both still love each other a lot. Danish was meant to be together, and I hope that when they talk they realize that. I love the way you write these characters, because it is so dead on. I can picture everything perfectly! Great job, and please update again soon. I always look forward to reading whatever you write, because it’s all incredible! :-)
Awww… you dedicated this one to me, you’re so sweet, sugar. And thats why I call you sugar, lol. Poor Dana is such a mess. I love that she’s so appealing whether she’s messed up or not. I’m relieved that she’s not a sloppy drunk, lol. I found the kissing to be rather sexy… wonder how you’d be with a few drinks sugar. I find it amazing Alice can sleep next to her in bed with only her underwear…. and nothing happens. Wow… what will power, lol. Wonder what would’ve happened if Vic didn’t wake them up… if it would’ve played out differently. I can feel the tension building between the two but there is nothing wrong with that, lol. I like the little tiff… then Dana strolls around naked, and of course Alice can’t help but look. Looks like Dana knows how to push Alice’s buttons, lol. That was a great addition to your story… and it took awhile but at least you’re still writing it. Please post another soon… I’ll trade some of those hershey kisses if I have to. I love you sugar.
i love this story. i actually forgot about it since its been so long since you updated it. but it was a good one. you need to do it more often. i am glad that alice is finally realizing that the only one for her is dana. but dana definitely needs some help.
You left me hanging when I read the snippet (ending with the question). But Alice said yes! And that was the most excited I got this chapter, because the rest of chapter frustrated the hell out of me. *reliefs sighs of frustrations* When will they pull it together? Dana needs to get of the drugs and the booze and Alice needs to make up her mind. As for Dana stripping in front of Alice, she didn’t do it on purpose. I just blame it on Dana being an athlete and she is used to walking around naked around other women in the locker room. I’ll bet you she never gave it a second thought… :P
I only have a minute, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the update. Great job. I look forward to reading more, and can’t wait to see where you take this. Bring on the Danish!
I finally registered on this thing so now I can let you know (once again) how much I love this fic. You write the characters perfectly :D I can’t wait for the next chapter. I know you’re trying… so try harder :P
Thanks for the great chapter ClosetDana =)
Ooh naughty naked Dana.. I bet that was a sight to see lol. Oh and cuddling in bed together in just their underwear was very sexy! Hmmm. Even tho there is a lot to sort out between Danish it was nice to see Alice being there for Dana, and the emotions they are both feeling for each other are building up nicely!! Alice now needs to get Dana off these pills.. then maybe they can talk more openly. Great chapter, post soon. Thanks. Ps tenterhooks sort of means anticipation so that is good? [for me anyway] lol.
oh that dana… she’s not as clueless as people think. she totally did that on purpose. looking forward to your next post, can’t wait to hear this talk they are going to have.
Great update – keep it coming.
I hate being repititious with my comments, but I’m so glad that you updated this. Srill finding it hard to believe that nothing else happened between Alice and Dana even with Dana being intoxicated, but it was great all the same. Can’t wait for the talk, so please post soon!
I think making Dana the scapegoat was just your way of taking the attention off of yourself. Again you leave us hanging …. such delicious torment. I so completely love this fic. While I do love Apogee, I love this one just a little bit more & can’t wait for the next update.