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To Live Without You (Chapter 19)
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“I guess I should have brought an extra cup of coffee,” Victoria basically shouted, startling the writer and causing her to roll out of the athlete’s arms directly onto the floor. Victoria chuckled as Alice pulled herself up, realizing she was half naked and jumping back in the bed embarrassed.
“What the fuck are you doing here Vic?” Dana mumbled into her pillow slowly rising to see Alice’s face next to her, the athlete’s eyes went big as she stared at the writer lying next to her.
“Well…you have an appointment with Gen—Dr. Jones and I came by to make sure you actually show up for this one.” Victoria said to Dana, the athlete obviously not listening to her anymore. The double’s partner shook her head turning to look out of the door she wished she hadn’t entered.
“Ok…well I’m gonna go, and leave this coffee in the kitchen…appointment’s at twelve and it’s ten thirty…um yeah.” Victoria retreated out of the house as quickly as possible, leaving the two women to their privacy.
Alice sat up in the bed,
“We didn’t fuck Dana,” the writer said sharply, Alice’s words ringing painfully in Dana’s hung over ears. The athlete winced,
“I didn’t think we did, I’m just surprised you’re here is all…I mean I remember you coming over last night…it’s just fuzzy, everything is really fuzzy.” Dana held her throbbing head, she was still trying to piece together last night, she actually didn’t even remember Alice coming over. The writer got out of the bed picking up her clothes from the chair across the room, preparing to leave, the athlete watched in silence for a moment.
“Where are you going?” Dana asked, trying not to seem desperate for the writer to stay.
“I’m going home Dana,” Alice said quickly pulling up her pants and turning to the confused athlete.
“Why are you mad? You said nothing happened right?” the athlete asked not understanding the writer’s sudden change in attitude,
“I’m not mad…nothing happened.” Alice said staring at the athlete seriously, her eyes drifted off, unable to hold Dana’s gaze for long.
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I was so glad to see that you updated this story…Not that I don’t love Apogee but this one is my favorite. And they do need to talk but this was a good start as well. And Alice was right Dana did that on purpose…hahaha go Dana! Looking forward to the talk(s) so keep um coming.
I agree – definitely on purpose! Thanks for the update.
Oh how I love and miss this story! I’m really glad that you updated this! Alice and Dana just need to get over themselves (and their addictions), and realize that they both still love each other a lot. Danish was meant to be together, and I hope that when they talk they realize that. I love the way you write these characters, because it is so dead on. I can picture everything perfectly! Great job, and please update again soon. I always look forward to reading whatever you write, because it’s all incredible! :-)
Awww… you dedicated this one to me, you’re so sweet, sugar. And thats why I call you sugar, lol. Poor Dana is such a mess. I love that she’s so appealing whether she’s messed up or not. I’m relieved that she’s not a sloppy drunk, lol. I found the kissing to be rather sexy… wonder how you’d be with a few drinks sugar. I find it amazing Alice can sleep next to her in bed with only her underwear…. and nothing happens. Wow… what will power, lol. Wonder what would’ve happened if Vic didn’t wake them up… if it would’ve played out differently. I can feel the tension building between the two but there is nothing wrong with that, lol. I like the little tiff… then Dana strolls around naked, and of course Alice can’t help but look. Looks like Dana knows how to push Alice’s buttons, lol. That was a great addition to your story… and it took awhile but at least you’re still writing it. Please post another soon… I’ll trade some of those hershey kisses if I have to. I love you sugar.
i love this story. i actually forgot about it since its been so long since you updated it. but it was a good one. you need to do it more often. i am glad that alice is finally realizing that the only one for her is dana. but dana definitely needs some help.
You left me hanging when I read the snippet (ending with the question). But Alice said yes! And that was the most excited I got this chapter, because the rest of chapter frustrated the hell out of me. *reliefs sighs of frustrations* When will they pull it together? Dana needs to get of the drugs and the booze and Alice needs to make up her mind. As for Dana stripping in front of Alice, she didn’t do it on purpose. I just blame it on Dana being an athlete and she is used to walking around naked around other women in the locker room. I’ll bet you she never gave it a second thought… :P
I only have a minute, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the update. Great job. I look forward to reading more, and can’t wait to see where you take this. Bring on the Danish!
I finally registered on this thing so now I can let you know (once again) how much I love this fic. You write the characters perfectly :D I can’t wait for the next chapter. I know you’re trying… so try harder :P
Thanks for the great chapter ClosetDana =)
Ooh naughty naked Dana.. I bet that was a sight to see lol. Oh and cuddling in bed together in just their underwear was very sexy! Hmmm. Even tho there is a lot to sort out between Danish it was nice to see Alice being there for Dana, and the emotions they are both feeling for each other are building up nicely!! Alice now needs to get Dana off these pills.. then maybe they can talk more openly. Great chapter, post soon. Thanks. Ps tenterhooks sort of means anticipation so that is good? [for me anyway] lol.
oh that dana… she’s not as clueless as people think. she totally did that on purpose. looking forward to your next post, can’t wait to hear this talk they are going to have.
Great update – keep it coming.
I hate being repititious with my comments, but I’m so glad that you updated this. Srill finding it hard to believe that nothing else happened between Alice and Dana even with Dana being intoxicated, but it was great all the same. Can’t wait for the talk, so please post soon!
I think making Dana the scapegoat was just your way of taking the attention off of yourself. Again you leave us hanging …. such delicious torment. I so completely love this fic. While I do love Apogee, I love this one just a little bit more & can’t wait for the next update.